A rich man unexpectedly lost all his wealth

Feb

4

2014

Salman Potter, a resident of Daroghan Wala, was found dead this morning. when asked by the medical staff they stated that a few days back he had a heart attack. authorities claim that Mr. Salman Potter was a very rich man but had quite a few enemies. his chicanery led him to his sorry fate. he had been involved with an underground mafia group and due to some unresolved issues they took all his money. devastated and heart broken after seeing all his wealth gone, he died from a brutal heart attack. upom further investigation it was discovered that he lived a very banal life but was very verbose. people of Daroghan Wala gather today for his eulogy.

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