My best Friend

Apr

9

2014

I have many friends but Aslam is my best friend he is monitor of our class he is very good person i like him very much. He wake up early in the morning he prayer every day. He have very good manners. His Family is very good. He earn first Position in our class. teachers are happy to see his grades. He help me very much is studies. he done his copies updated every day. he did home work daily.

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6/10

wakes up
he attains
he helps

You are making English Grammatical errors

Answers Reviewed By: Pacans [1046 Orange Star Level]
Review #2

Sir, it’s my first attempts. That’s why. i will try my best next time. Thank you

Answers Reviewed By: affan [15 Grey Star Level]

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