Women are always better parents than men. How far ypu agree with this? Give your opinion in not less than 250 words.

Aug

24

2017

Parenting is a very sensitive process it is just like walking on a hair strand. Most of the child’s personality is formed during the age of 3-5 and moulding a persona is a very fragile duty given to parents,let alone the usual feeding, dressing them up responsibilities.

A women has gone through every microsecond of child’s growth and upbringing and submitted to every pain in doing so. She knows the flexibility of toddler, how you can bend him to any direction. In a country like Pakistan we have seen examples of successful single mothers who dedicate their lives to their kids, not caring about their feelings even if they are young and can go about their life as they want. Men on the other hand find it their right to find a woman as soon as they are single.

There is another notion to it, in west it is totally different and the other way round, most childcare duties are done by fathers. Children are more attached to their dads. It is also quite commonly seen that a child looks up to his father, most kids dads are their realm super heroes and role models. In turn the responsibility of a father increases in transferring good habits to his offsprings.

The bond of mother and child is examplry and is rarely proven wrong more so a woman can smoothly shift fatherly responsibilities if needed inversely it does not holds true for men. Evidently on the scale of parenthood maternal sides definetly overweighs the other .

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* A woman
The first sentence of the 2nd paragraph is ambiguous. Please rewrite it.
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The ideas were not properly developed and you deviated from the topic.Write it again specifying explicitly how mothers could be better parents than fathers.

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