Deciding the size of one’s own family is a personal preference In your opinion should government intervene in the rights of the individual with regard to family planning?

Sep

5

2017

Family is a second step towards building a community after marriage. This can be linked to a budding plant which later turns into a huge tree.
Family planning is a huge notion among people nowadays. Ad agencies and pharmaceutical industries are gaining huge revenues out of this perception .It is usually a government financed initiative. In a country like Pakistan,specially in rural areas where couples would end up bearing a dozen children just to have a boy not caring about how would they raise them. This is common among people hardly making both ends meet living on belief that a boy will some how magically bring luck to them. So, it was an appropriate smooth move from government to at least try and stop such theories.
Inversely education is making an immense difference in individual beliefs, Marriage partners are trying to foresee future and planning their children around them. So, they can try and focus on every kid’s physical and mental upbringing effectively.
Pakistan is among the most populous country after china and India. China has taken a strict move and allowed people to have only one child to manage the birth rate. We are living in a world where common resources like water, food and shelter are diminishing. So, just soft initiatives like advertisements are not enough. There should stiff rules to handle these issues specially among illiterate population.
To cut long story short, having a family is a blessing but this blessing should not be taken for granted. Finding a balance certainly is a key.

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