Writing task 1 (6th task)

Jul

28

2020

The following table depicts the information pertaining to the number of cars sold in four different cities in 2000 and 2010.
Even though 1.5 million cars has been sold in Orlando in 2000 that was the highest figure in 2000, this number increases intensively in 2010, and a total of 4.5 million cars have been sold in Orlando. In contrast, 1.5 million cars sold in 2010 in Rosville. Although this figure is the lowest in 2010, they experienced a downfall as the number of cars sold in Rosville was 2 million in 2000.
In 2000, 4 million cars have been sold in Istanbul. surprisingly, this figure decreased twofold in 2010, and only 2 million cars have been sold in Istanbul.
In Bangkok, 2 million cars has been sold in 2000, and this figure increased significantly in 2010 from 2 million to 3 million.
Moreover, the same number of cars has been sold in Bangkok and Roseville in 2000 that is 2 million.
Overall, 9.5 million cars have been sold in four cities in 2000. On the other hand, 11 million cars sold in 2010. Thus, more cars were sold in 2010 than in 2000.

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Review #1

Introduction:
* This / The table (Following isn’t necessary)
* In the year 2000 and 2010 respectively.

Overview:
* Not written
* SHOULD write after introduction.

Body Para 1:
*Even though 1.5 million cars has been sold in Orlando in 2000 WHICH was the highest figure in 2000, this number increases intensively in 2010 UPTO A total of 4.5 million cars.

* In contrast, 1.5 million cars sold in 2010 in Rosville, THOIGH this figure is the lowest in 2010, they experienced a downfall TO 02MILLION IN 2000.

* Rest I think is okay though I am not as good as u are..

Answers Reviewed By: rabbia [60 Blue Star Level]

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