Write a letter to a friend who is currently moving into a new home. Write to your friend Asking about the new home Telling them you can help Describing how you can help

Aug

24

2021

Dear Adam,

Thanks for the classic book, great to receive book-thrillers from you, as always! I’m so glad to hear that you bought a new house – a life milestone achieved!

Karen and I would love to visit you guys this summer as kids will be on school holidays. So, how is the new neighborhood? I remember, how often we use to go downtown just for fish hoagies.Being very far from downtown is always a hassle, you made the right choice in that aspect. How big is the atrium? The natural light always add a unique calmness in house.
I also wanted to write you if you need any help with moving. I had worked with a shipping company that might be helpful for you in moving. They are very competent in their work and handle fragile items very cautiously. Moreover, in my experience I had found them very reasonable in price in comparison to other vendors. With this letter, i had attaced their contact details.

Do write me when you get this!

Love,

Usama

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Review #1

Hi Usama,

Its a good letter. But you could have asked the below questions too.

I would love to know that how spacious your house is?
How many bedrooms it contains??
Hope you and your wife would be decorating it with all the modern style furniture!!!

Score 6/9

Answers Reviewed By: Pacans [1046 Orange Star Level]

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