Essay: written beautifully, tons of ideas but some mistakes. I'm beginner myself but will try to correct it UPTO my capability. Introduction: in this essay I would like to discuss both the positive impacts of outdoor activities as well as other activities parents should encourage their children to dRead more
Essay: written beautifully, tons of ideas but some mistakes. I’m beginner myself but will try to correct it UPTO my capability.
Introduction: in this essay I would like to discuss both the positive impacts of outdoor activities as well as other activities parents should encourage their children to do and consequences of it.
Body Para 1: Avoid: firstly,secondly or first of all.
outdoor activities develops confidence in THE childrens AS they would be able to meet PEOPLE OF DIFFERENT MENTALITY AND WILL ABLE to learn about their culture, values, and languages. As a result, they WILL BE more confident as compare to other children who didn’t get out of their comfort zone. AS SIMILAR FINDINGS ARE OBSERVED BY JON DUO , AN ARTICLE PUBLISEHED IN ______ IN THE YEAR ____.
Moving forward, outdoor activities such as playing football, cricket makes children physically active and strong. ALSO it helps to boost our stamina that makes our immune system strong and healthy AS strong immune system can easily fight bacterias WHICH make them physically strong and enthusiastic.
Introduction: * This / The table (Following isn't necessary) * In the year 2000 and 2010 respectively. Overview: * Not written * SHOULD write after introduction. Body Para 1: *Even though 1.5 million cars has been sold in Orlando in 2000 WHICH was the highest figure in 2000, this number increases inRead more
Introduction:
* This / The table (Following isn’t necessary)
* In the year 2000 and 2010 respectively.
Overview:
* Not written
* SHOULD write after introduction.
Body Para 1:
*Even though 1.5 million cars has been sold in Orlando in 2000 WHICH was the highest figure in 2000, this number increases intensively in 2010 UPTO A total of 4.5 million cars.
* In contrast, 1.5 million cars sold in 2010 in Rosville, THOIGH this figure is the lowest in 2010, they experienced a downfall TO 02MILLION IN 2000.
* Rest I think is okay though I am not as good as u are..
In some cultures, childrens are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Btw, it is nice peace of work.. Keep the fore burning. Good structure. Task acheived.
Btw, it is nice peace of work.. Keep the fore burning.
Good structure.
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In some cultures, childrens are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Read my sample, too.
Read my sample, too.
See lessAnimals also have emotions and feel equal pain as humans. We should stop all pharmaceutical companies from doing trials on innocent animals. Give your opinion in not less than 250 words.
*nice work
*nice work
See lessSome people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Task achievement is good but you missed examples
Task achievement is good but you missed examples
See lessSome people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Secondlytly can be replaced *moving forward*
Secondlytly can be replaced *moving forward*
See lessSome people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Firstly can be replaced*to begin with*
Firstly can be replaced*to begin with*
See lessIt is often said that governments invest too much money attempting to protect wildlife when there are other much greater problems that money should spent on. To what extent do you agree? What other problems do we have?
Task not achieved. Each part of QUESTION must be attempted to get band more than 07..
Task not achieved.
Each part of QUESTION must be attempted to get band more than 07..
See lessIt is often said that governments invest too much money attempting to protect wildlife when there are other much greater problems that money should spent on. To what extent do you agree? What other problems do we have?
Task not achieved. Each part of As must be attempted to get band more than 07..
Task not achieved.
Each part of As must be attempted to get band more than 07..
See lessIt is often said that governments invest too much money attempting to protect wildlife when there are other much greater problems that money should spent on. To what extent do you agree? What other problems do we have?
Task not achieved.
Task not achieved.
See lessThe percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010
People DONATE more money Please add chart so that I can comment.
People DONATE more money
Please add chart so that I can comment.
See lessThe changes that have taken place at west park secondary school since it’s construction in 1950.
Try to add chart as well
Try to add chart as well
See lessSome people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others believe that school is the place to learn this.
Is it this opinion Qs? Or advantages/disadv???
Is it this opinion Qs? Or advantages/disadv???
See lessHappiness is considered very important in life.why is it difficult to define?what factors are important in achieving it?
Nice Writing
Nice Writing
See lessThere is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?
Please review
Please review
See lessMany retired people today are choosing to live in other countries What are the advantages and disadvantages
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Please review
See lessParents think that childrens should indulge in outdoor activities. It has positive and negative side? What other activities parents could encourage the children do and why?
Essay: written beautifully, tons of ideas but some mistakes. I'm beginner myself but will try to correct it UPTO my capability. Introduction: in this essay I would like to discuss both the positive impacts of outdoor activities as well as other activities parents should encourage their children to dRead more
Essay: written beautifully, tons of ideas but some mistakes. I’m beginner myself but will try to correct it UPTO my capability.
Introduction: in this essay I would like to discuss both the positive impacts of outdoor activities as well as other activities parents should encourage their children to do and consequences of it.
Body Para 1: Avoid: firstly,secondly or first of all.
outdoor activities develops confidence in THE childrens AS they would be able to meet PEOPLE OF DIFFERENT MENTALITY AND WILL ABLE to learn about their culture, values, and languages. As a result, they WILL BE more confident as compare to other children who didn’t get out of their comfort zone. AS SIMILAR FINDINGS ARE OBSERVED BY JON DUO , AN ARTICLE PUBLISEHED IN ______ IN THE YEAR ____.
Moving forward, outdoor activities such as playing football, cricket makes children physically active and strong. ALSO it helps to boost our stamina that makes our immune system strong and healthy AS strong immune system can easily fight bacterias WHICH make them physically strong and enthusiastic.
REST IS GOOD.
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Writing task 1 (6th task)
Introduction: * This / The table (Following isn't necessary) * In the year 2000 and 2010 respectively. Overview: * Not written * SHOULD write after introduction. Body Para 1: *Even though 1.5 million cars has been sold in Orlando in 2000 WHICH was the highest figure in 2000, this number increases inRead more
Introduction:
* This / The table (Following isn’t necessary)
* In the year 2000 and 2010 respectively.
Overview:
* Not written
* SHOULD write after introduction.
Body Para 1:
*Even though 1.5 million cars has been sold in Orlando in 2000 WHICH was the highest figure in 2000, this number increases intensively in 2010 UPTO A total of 4.5 million cars.
* In contrast, 1.5 million cars sold in 2010 in Rosville, THOIGH this figure is the lowest in 2010, they experienced a downfall TO 02MILLION IN 2000.
* Rest I think is okay though I am not as good as u are..
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