* persistently increasing The situation is actually exacerbating as the time is passing quite evident have failed to inculcate ethical standards in the minds of students
* persistently increasing
The situation is actually exacerbating as the time is passing
quite evident
have failed to inculcate ethical standards in the minds of students
* It should be made accessible to It would enable the teacher to gauge the performance of a student Principal Moreover, it would help the parents to focus on the weaker areas.
* It should be made accessible to
It would enable the teacher to gauge the performance of a student
Principal
Moreover, it would help the parents to focus on the weaker areas.
* benefits associated with the application and the person is striving to acquire some knowledge out of it, it would not be considered a wastage of time
* benefits associated with the application
and the person is striving to acquire some knowledge out of it, it would not be considered a wastage of time
*In most countries, It would be an exacting task for the students to sit with students of different ages * You will have to read about what dropout age is Do not make very long sentences Please write this paragraph with shorter sentences
*In most countries,
It would be an exacting task for the students to sit with students of different ages
* You will have to read about what dropout age is
Do not make very long sentences
Please write this paragraph with shorter sentences
* Nowadays arts has become fascinating for every person Which are used in house, but the way the dish is prepared makes us believe that the food would be appetizing Art education enables a student to be more creative It makes students more confident and academically strong. Art education is importanRead more
* Nowadays arts has become fascinating for every person
Which are used in house, but the way the dish is prepared makes us believe that the food would be appetizing
Art education enables a student to be more creative
It makes students more confident and academically strong.
Art education is important as far as the overall grooming of a child is concerned.
* Should have the right to see This would enable the parents to gauge the performance of their children. Moreover, it would let them devise a pragmatic approach to help their children to achieve better grades.
* Should have the right to see
This would enable the parents to gauge the performance of their children. Moreover, it would let them devise a pragmatic approach to help their children to achieve better grades.
* School plays an indispensable role in the character-building of children If school fails to fulfill its responsibility, students would become ill-mannered and irresponsible.
* School plays an indispensable role in the character-building of children
If school fails to fulfill its responsibility, students would become ill-mannered and irresponsible.
* different designs we need to ascertain the purpose of the building This example clearly illustrates are given rank at intermediate level Write again! There are many grammatical mistakes. Mistake in every other line.
* different designs
we need to ascertain the purpose of the building
This example clearly illustrates
are given rank at intermediate level
Write again!
There are many grammatical mistakes. Mistake in every other line.
*have opened there are innumerable reasons behind this schools can easily make advertise by making the students wear clothes which have the logos of the schools ample money It is my notion that Wearing a uniform would be perceived acceptable and desirable by others 7/10
*have opened
there are innumerable reasons behind this
schools can easily make advertise by making the students wear clothes which have the logos of the schools
ample money
It is my notion that
Wearing a uniform would be perceived acceptable and desirable by others
*devoted and assiduous employees How would it be justified to pay them the same salaries It would have an adverse effect on the growth of the company This policy would be counterproductive There would be no healthy competition among the employees As a result of which there be no growth 7/10 Good!
*devoted and assiduous employees
How would it be justified to pay them the same salaries
It would have an adverse effect on the growth of the company
This policy would be counterproductive
There would be no healthy competition among the employees
As a result of which there be no growth
*should cast their votes Many believe are of the view that Children who are Children are also very sagacious and prudent According to my contention 7/10
*should cast their votes
Many believe are of the view that
Children who are
Children are also very sagacious and prudent
According to my contention
* phones help people to connect Useful to connect to their parents students should be allowed to cell phones could disturb their lives might affect should not be allowed to have cell phones 5/10
* phones help people to connect
Useful to connect to their parents
students should be allowed to
cell phones could disturb their lives
might affect
should not be allowed to have cell phones
Few people agree with the notion of encouraging competition some claim Good, but avoid using difficult vocabulary words as you are using them incorrectly.
Few people agree with the notion of encouraging competition
some claim
Good, but avoid using difficult vocabulary words as you are using them incorrectly.
* Yes of course should render myriad reasons If I am on the road and lose my mobile signals, I would require internet connection. With the help of the internet connection I would be able to hire a car. 3/10
* Yes of course should render
myriad reasons
If I am on the road and lose my mobile signals, I would require internet connection.
With the help of the internet connection I would be able to hire a car.
Paragraph on should students be able to grade their students?
* fathom the perspective For an institution, is integral them to excel in the exams
* fathom the perspective
See lessFor an institution,
is integral
them to excel in the exams
Paragraph on Is cheating getting worse?
* persistently increasing The situation is actually exacerbating as the time is passing quite evident have failed to inculcate ethical standards in the minds of students
* persistently increasing
See lessThe situation is actually exacerbating as the time is passing
quite evident
have failed to inculcate ethical standards in the minds of students
Paragraph on Does your school hand out too many A’s
Good!
Good!
See lessParagraph on Is online learning as good as face to face learning?
* varies according to comfort level conventional cross-questioning adopt such kind of learning
* varies according to comfort level
See lessconventional
cross-questioning
adopt such kind of learning
Paragraph on Should middle school students be drug tested?
* mandatory extra-curricular
* mandatory
See lessextra-curricular
Paragraph on should reading math be taught in gym class too?
* cumbersome task
* cumbersome task
See lessParagraph on How seriously should we take standardized tests?
*We cannot be dubious about the usefulness of standardized exams We cannot have comparative analysis between all the applicants
*We cannot be dubious about the usefulness of standardized exams
We cannot have comparative analysis between all the applicants
See lessParagraph on How well do you think standardized tests measure your abilities?
* with them Good!
* with them
See lessGood!
Paragraph on What should the punishment be for acts of cyber bullying?
pecuniary damages should be doubled
pecuniary damages should be doubled
See lessParagraph on What should the punishment be for acts of cyber bullying?
if someone again commits a crime after fulfilling the punishment, he or she should be required pay the double the amount.
if someone again commits a crime after fulfilling the punishment, he or she should be required pay the double the amount.
See lessParagraph on Do you spend too much time preparing for standardized tests?
* They do not provide comparative analysis I have not spent much time on preparing on them
* They do not provide comparative analysis
See lessI have not spent much time on preparing on them
Paragraph on Should school offer cash bonuses for good scores?
* They might work relentlessly and meticulously
* They might work relentlessly and meticulously
See lessParagraph on Should we rethink how long students spend in high school?
* attain more knowledge 4-year program 2-year program
* attain more knowledge
See less4-year program
2-year program
Paragraph on Do schools provide students with enough opportunities to be creative?
Good!
Good!
See lessParagraph on How important is art’s education?
*as vital component of education as other fields it is imperative to make students learn certain art-related skills
*as vital component of education as other fields
See lessit is imperative to make students learn certain art-related skills
Paragraph on What are you really learning at school?
* A place to educate and enlighten students. that become school teaches us persistence, patience, perseverance
* A place to educate and enlighten students.
See lessthat become
school teaches us persistence, patience, perseverance
Paragraph on Does gym help students perform better in all their classes?
* End up denying themselves physical education it has now be proven that performances
* End up denying themselves physical education
See lessit has now be proven that
performances
Paragraph on Who should be able to see student’s records?
* It should be made accessible to It would enable the teacher to gauge the performance of a student Principal Moreover, it would help the parents to focus on the weaker areas.
* It should be made accessible to
See lessIt would enable the teacher to gauge the performance of a student
Principal
Moreover, it would help the parents to focus on the weaker areas.
Paragraph on Do apps helps you or just waste your time?
* benefits associated with the application and the person is striving to acquire some knowledge out of it, it would not be considered a wastage of time
* benefits associated with the application
See lessand the person is striving to acquire some knowledge out of it, it would not be considered a wastage of time
Paragraph on Are children of illegal immigrants entitled to a public education?
Normally,
Normally,
See lessParagraph on Are children of illegal immigrants entitled to a public education?
Good!
Good!
See lessParagraph on What is the right amount of group work in school?
* It would enable you to learn new things However, it would be unjustifiable to gainsay the idea of working alone
* It would enable you to learn new things
See lessHowever, it would be unjustifiable to gainsay the idea of working alone
Paragraph:Is your school day too short?
* Our teachers work meticulously to plan our curriculum and timings
* Our teachers work meticulously to plan our curriculum and timings
See lessParagraph:Do you think a longer school calendar is a good idea?
Good
Good
See lessParagraph:should the dropout age be raised?
*In most countries, It would be an exacting task for the students to sit with students of different ages * You will have to read about what dropout age is Do not make very long sentences Please write this paragraph with shorter sentences
*In most countries,
It would be an exacting task for the students to sit with students of different ages
* You will have to read about what dropout age is
Do not make very long sentences
See lessPlease write this paragraph with shorter sentences
Paragraph:Should students be allowed to skip senior year of high school?
* by rendering them ample information
* by rendering them ample information
See lessParagraph on What criteria should be used in awarding scholarship for college?
If students get good score in previous academic records and good enough in research and other work, scholarships should be awarded to them.
If students get good score in previous academic records and good enough in research and other work, scholarships should be awarded to them.
See lessHow important is art education?
* Nowadays arts has become fascinating for every person Which are used in house, but the way the dish is prepared makes us believe that the food would be appetizing Art education enables a student to be more creative It makes students more confident and academically strong. Art education is importanRead more
* Nowadays arts has become fascinating for every person
See lessWhich are used in house, but the way the dish is prepared makes us believe that the food would be appetizing
Art education enables a student to be more creative
It makes students more confident and academically strong.
Art education is important as far as the overall grooming of a child is concerned.
Are children of illegal immigration entitled to a public school ?
Getting education is a right of every person. It would be unjustifiable to deprive someone of this right.
Getting education is a right of every person.
See lessIt would be unjustifiable to deprive someone of this right.
Who should be able to see student record?
* Should have the right to see This would enable the parents to gauge the performance of their children. Moreover, it would let them devise a pragmatic approach to help their children to achieve better grades.
* Should have the right to see
See lessThis would enable the parents to gauge the performance of their children. Moreover, it would let them devise a pragmatic approach to help their children to achieve better grades.
How important is art education?
Acquiring art education would augment confidence and creativity in children.
Acquiring art education would augment confidence and creativity in children.
See lessDoes gym help students perform better in all their classes ?
Gym would promote healthy lifestyle in a students Student would be getting the much required physical activity
Gym would promote healthy lifestyle in a students
See lessStudent would be getting the much required physical activity
Should we rethink how long students spend in high schools
* School plays an indispensable role in the character-building of children If school fails to fulfill its responsibility, students would become ill-mannered and irresponsible.
* School plays an indispensable role in the character-building of children
See lessIf school fails to fulfill its responsibility, students would become ill-mannered and irresponsible.
What are you really learning in school?
*It is my assertion that We tend to learn more from our professional lives
*It is my assertion that
See lessWe tend to learn more from our professional lives
should students be able to grade their teachers?
*Yes it is my notion that students should be allowed to grade the teacher Teachers would be able to enhance and augment their skills
*Yes it is my notion that students should be allowed to grade the teacher
See lessTeachers would be able to enhance and augment their skills
shirt
* I have all sorts of shirts its quality is commendable
* I have all sorts of shirts
See lessits quality is commendable
food
* favorite dish is The dish is quite appetizing
* favorite dish is
See lessThe dish is quite appetizing
Street
*Every street has its uniqueness The street is known for its serenity Whenever I feel exhausted The place is mesmerizing
*Every street has its uniqueness
See lessThe street is known for its serenity
Whenever I feel exhausted
The place is mesmerizing
Bicycle
* It was a product of Sohrab Company. My grandfather Came to school we used to go for a run
* It was a product of Sohrab Company.
See lessMy grandfather
Came to school
we used to go for a run
Airline
*Endeavoring to get the maximum number of passengers The staff was affable and cordial
*Endeavoring to get the maximum number of passengers
See lessThe staff was affable and cordial
When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Real exam in March 10, 2018)
* different designs we need to ascertain the purpose of the building This example clearly illustrates are given rank at intermediate level Write again! There are many grammatical mistakes. Mistake in every other line.
* different designs
we need to ascertain the purpose of the building
This example clearly illustrates
are given rank at intermediate level
Write again!
See lessThere are many grammatical mistakes. Mistake in every other line.
Essay on should students have to wear uniforms?
*have opened there are innumerable reasons behind this schools can easily make advertise by making the students wear clothes which have the logos of the schools ample money It is my notion that Wearing a uniform would be perceived acceptable and desirable by others 7/10
*have opened
there are innumerable reasons behind this
schools can easily make advertise by making the students wear clothes which have the logos of the schools
ample money
It is my notion that
Wearing a uniform would be perceived acceptable and desirable by others
7/10
See lessIt is believed that if everyone working in a particular company would be paid the same salary ,the company would excel.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
*devoted and assiduous employees How would it be justified to pay them the same salaries It would have an adverse effect on the growth of the company This policy would be counterproductive There would be no healthy competition among the employees As a result of which there be no growth 7/10 Good!
*devoted and assiduous employees
How would it be justified to pay them the same salaries
It would have an adverse effect on the growth of the company
This policy would be counterproductive
There would be no healthy competition among the employees
As a result of which there be no growth
7/10
See lessGood!
Essay on should the voting age be lowered to thirteen?
*should cast their votes Many believe are of the view that Children who are Children are also very sagacious and prudent According to my contention 7/10
*should cast their votes
Many believe are of the view that
Children who are
Children are also very sagacious and prudent
According to my contention
7/10
See lessshould students allowed to have cel phones in elementry and high schools?
* phones help people to connect Useful to connect to their parents students should be allowed to cell phones could disturb their lives might affect should not be allowed to have cell phones 5/10
* phones help people to connect
Useful to connect to their parents
students should be allowed to
cell phones could disturb their lives
might affect
should not be allowed to have cell phones
5/10
See lessSome people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Other believes that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views.
Few people agree with the notion of encouraging competition some claim Good, but avoid using difficult vocabulary words as you are using them incorrectly.
Few people agree with the notion of encouraging competition
some claim
Good, but avoid using difficult vocabulary words as you are using them incorrectly.
See lessShould students textbooks be replaced by notebook computers ?
*students' textbooks eyesight weak another notable disadvantage Excellent! I am proud of you. 9/10
*students’ textbooks
eyesight weak
another notable disadvantage
Excellent! I am proud of you.
See less9/10
should schools raise money by selling candy and sugary soft drinks to students?
* should be utilized The money generated by selling candy could be utilized to develop better facilities. Good!
* should be utilized
The money generated by selling candy could be utilized to develop better facilities.
Good!
See lessShould cities offer free public Wi-Fi
* Yes of course should render myriad reasons If I am on the road and lose my mobile signals, I would require internet connection. With the help of the internet connection I would be able to hire a car. 3/10
* Yes of course should render
myriad reasons
If I am on the road and lose my mobile signals, I would require internet connection.
With the help of the internet connection I would be able to hire a car.
3/10
See lessShould college athletes be paid for playing?
* those who participate in it both students and the country They deserve to be paid for their work 6/10
* those who participate in it
both students and the country
They deserve to be paid for their work
6/10
See less