5/10 * Most of the times, people get into debt by buying things they do not need do not get satisfied or to impress it is human nature to feel more attracted towards a person has to control himself or herself They should not indulge themselves in They should feel satisfied

7/10 Very good * one of the greatest relationships which exists int he universe bears unlimited pain she does not even care for her own comfort

* It is a negative thought Jealousy can be a burden on a person's heart Siblings get jealous of the their siblings Poor-impoverished show-evince jealousy towards the academically strong students Please do not use the word good or bad student. There is no such thing as that. Students are academicallyRead more

6/10 *Father loves me passionately and compassionately Whenever I want something he never snubs me I insisted He somehow managed who worked things we wanted time with him

* is an essential need which is why people love to eat dishes gets open in the area Please write the following sentences again In fact a large portion of cuisine was brought up from this store, because there food menu was very good and they offer a variety of food so almost everyone can find somethiRead more

Good effort 7/10 * It is an Islamic It solely came into existence take their myriad activities I ( I would always be in upper case) is to offer people offer are set in accordance with the sun perform family members visit

Band 7 Very good!

Your essay should be more focused. It should start by answering the question. You should avoid deviating from the topic. The first 9-10 lines are deviating from the topic. Band 6.5

* to make a person realize he or she has done wrong used by friends that it is their right Every person has his or her own way of punishing others it could have adverse affects on the minds of children

8/10 Good!

* depends on money improves It became ubiquitous over the time everyone wants dearth of resources 7/10 Much better!

9/10 Excellent article!

* I am an introvert I have spare time I watch I recall my childhood In which Tom always tried to which I can say is my favorite

What is the meaning of brainstorming their child? * should help their children do what the children want to do their children's dreams 8/10

* Weekend has a different meaning to everyone Which thinks Being an updated racer everyone tries There were many grammatical mistakes. I also did not understand whether you wanted to write down in past simple tense or present simple tense. 5/10

( You have to put past simple tense for these which have already happened) * He started his career in 1993 Very good article 8/10

* is that it is beautiful 7/10 Good effort!

Band 7.5 Excellent effort! Keep it up

* A woman The first sentence of the 2nd paragraph is ambiguous. Please rewrite it. exemplary 6.5 The ideas were not properly developed and you deviated from the topic.Write it again specifying explicitly how mothers could be better parents than fathers.

* We would not use amount with people 9/10

* I keep books biographies, novels and religious books. which was written this book is about their lives this is a very famous book Good effort 7/10

*I am an introvert I communicate less with others There were many teachers who taught me because of his teaching methodology my relationship with him was very special Whenever I faced a problem, I always sought his help I was able to have a sound understanding of Chemistry due to him He was very corRead more

* who has never done work in his or her life The job you do to earn money is work Every task which is productive in some manner can be considered as work Or we become lethargic The more active we are, the more productive we become 5/10 Please write it again the in the comment box. There were many grRead more

I admire the number 3 I believe it is my lucky number Call this being superstitious Despite that I have so much affection for it

Try to make the introduction a bit more concise. Very good effort 7.5