5/10 IELTS 5.5 "Remove these grammatical errors" some people say every action would be landing but with the help of computers computation is much easier
5/10
IELTS 5.5
“Remove these grammatical errors”
some people say
every action
would be landing
but with the help of computers computation is much easier
What is your all-time favorite movie and why? Write an essay persuading readers to watch this film.
8/10
8/10
See lessSome people go right on to college after high school; others take a year or more off to work or travel. Which do you think is the better choice? State your position and support it with specific reasons and examples.
Band 7
Band 7
See lessMoney is the single motivational factor for success in any work field. How far you agree with this?
7/10
7/10
See lessToday, there are more and more reality shows on television. Do these shows make good television? Why or why not? Explain your answer using specific reasons and examples.
7/10
7/10
See lessGood habits improve our physical, emotional, and/or financial health. Select one of your good habits and write an essay persuading readers to make that habit a part of their lives.
6/10 Grammatical mistakes!
6/10
See lessGrammatical mistakes!
A few decades ago, many families had half a dozen or more children. Nowadays, more and more families are choosing to have only one or two children. Are smaller families better than larger ones?
5/10 Many Grammatical mistakes
5/10
See lessMany Grammatical mistakes
There is an age after which one’s efficiency decreases. Should young people in the working fields replace all the old people?
4/10
4/10
See lessShould developing countries pay more attention towards education or improving business standards?
5/10 much better
5/10
See lessmuch better
There is an age after which one’s efficiency decreases. Should young people in the working fields replace all the old people?
do not use only he 7/10
do not use only he
See less7/10
Are famous people treated unfairly by the media ? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private lives?
3/10 all over the world. which gives what is happening media creates media has
3/10
all over the world.
See lesswhich gives
what is happening
media creates
media has
Are famous people treated unfairly by the media ? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private lives?
7/10
7/10
See lessLife was simpler without so much of technology. Give your views in not less than 250 words.
3/10
3/10
See lessTime is an important factor in every field. Do you think following strict time limits is more important than giving quality results.
7/10
7/10
See lessChildren are the impressions of their parent’s behaviour. If a child behaves badly his parents should be considered responsible and should be punished. How far you agree with this.
7/10
7/10
See lessSmoking is a bad habit and should be abandoned completely world wide. Give your views in not less than 250 words
Please look at the English Grammar mistakes! Most people think smoking affects our character and destroys our health. 4/10
Please look at the English Grammar mistakes!
Most people think smoking affects our character and destroys our health.
4/10
See lessIn order keep the students more focused, the sports classes should be stopped in High schools. You think this will be a right approach for a better generation?
Remove so 7/10
Remove so
See less7/10
Many schools offer students who are native speakers of another language the opportunity to take classes in their native tongue so that they can more easily assimilate and better understand the material. Some educators believe that this is a disservice and that these students should be immersed in the English language. How do you fell about this issue? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position
Band 7
Band 7
See lessMedical researchers, cosmetic companies and others often perform experiments on animals. Many people feel that experimentation on animals is wrong and should be stopped immediately
Band 7-7.5 Excellent!
Band 7-7.5
See lessExcellent!
If you were given to change, what all changes you would implement in this 21st century to make our world a better living place? Discuss a few changes in not less than 250 words.
Band 7.5 Excellent
Band 7.5
See lessExcellent
When most of the population in developing countries do not have food to eat and place to live, it is immaterial to talk about saving forests as a gesture to protect our environment. The aim should be to utilize maximum land for food production and making homes for the homeless
Band 7 Good effort!
Band 7
See lessGood effort!
In the past when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. Write at least 250 words.
6.5 Band became to study and work produces
6.5 Band
See lessbecame
to study and work
produces
To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities
5/6!!! This is very good! I am going to share it on my facebook page.
5/6!!!
See lessThis is very good! I am going to share it on my facebook page.
According to a recent report, cheating among……..to decrease cheating among students.
5/6 or 6/6 Excellent work!
5/6 or 6/6
See lessExcellent work!
health magazine published in Corpora
5/6 or 6/6 Excellent. You are a very hard-working person.
5/6 or 6/6
See lessExcellent. You are a very hard-working person.
What do you think the government in your country should do to make your country more successful
6/10 key to I accede to
6/10
See lesskey to
I accede to
Some parents grow their children in strict discipline while others leave them free to learn lessons of lives on their own. Which is one of these is a better approach and why?
8/10
8/10
See lessAnimals also have emotions and feel equal pain as humans. We should stop all pharmaceutical companies from doing trails on innocent animals. Give your opinion.
8/10 mankind likewise
8/10
See lessmankind
likewise
Should poor countries continue to receive International Aids?
7/10 "Grammatical errors" tries to achieve ,the country referred to as
7/10
See less“Grammatical errors”
tries to achieve
,the country
referred to as
Children are the impressions of their parent’s behaviour. If a child behaves badly his parents should be considered responsible and should be punished. How far you agree with this.
4/10 Many mistakes until they reach parents teach also influence
4/10
Many mistakes
until they reach
See lessparents teach
also influence
Internet has made information so handy, but at the same time, its spoiling our children with all the adult content. Should children be kept away from internet ?
6/10 of mankind
6/10
See lessof mankind
In some countries the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others people can work until they are 65 or 70. Until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment?
7/10
7/10
See lessWorking and living abroad helps us to know other cultures well. How far you think working abroad has good or bad impacts on our cultural lives?
9/10 Excellent!
9/10
See lessExcellent!
Should developing countries pay more attention towards education or improving business standards?
it is education educational sectors
it is education
See lesseducational sectors
Time is an important factor in every field. Do you think following strict time limits is more important than giving quality results.
7/10 once it has passed in a given time as far as quality is concerned
7/10
See lessonce it has passed
in a given time
as far as quality is concerned
What do you think the government in your country should do to make your country more successful.
6/10 "Many mistakes"
6/10
See less“Many mistakes”
In order keep the students more focused, the sports classes should be stopped in High schools. You think this will be a right approach for a better generation?
8/10 Excellent
8/10
See lessExcellent
The modern technology is all making things easily available. Internet has provided us the easy dowloadable versions of most books we need. Can internet world replace the world of books and words ?
IELTS Band 6.0-6.5
IELTS Band 6.0-6.5
See lessThe modern technology is all making things easily available. Internet has provided us the easy dowloadable versions of most books we need. Can internet world replace the world of books and words ?
7/10
7/10
See lessSome parents grow their children in strict discipline while others leave them free to learn lessons of lives on their own. Which is one of these is a better approach and why?
7/10 Good!
7/10
See lessGood!
Computers can easily do all the basic and advanced calculations. Do you think your children should spend more time learning basic mathematics or advanced computer technology.
5/10 IELTS 5.5 "Remove these grammatical errors" some people say every action would be landing but with the help of computers computation is much easier
5/10
See lessIELTS 5.5
“Remove these grammatical errors”
some people say
every action
would be landing
but with the help of computers computation is much easier
Most criminals are set free once they finish their jail terms. Is the re introduction of criminals in societies is justified.
6/10 "Many grammatical mistakes" I will discuss in life they are deliberate and sometimes they just happen.
6/10
See less“Many grammatical mistakes” I will discuss in life
they are deliberate and sometimes they just happen.
What do you think the government in your country should do to make your country more successful.
7/10
7/10
See lessWomen are always better parents than men. How far you agree with this? Give your opinion.
7/10
7/10
See lessIn order to keep children more focused, the sports classes should be stopped in High schools. You think this will be a right approach for a better generation?
9/10 Very good!
9/10
See lessVery good!
smoking is a bad habit and should be abandoned completely world wide. Give your views.
8/10 Your Grammar is perfect! These are good paragraphs, but when you write essays you will have to write more and also make some paragraphs.
8/10
See lessYour Grammar is perfect!
These are good paragraphs, but when you write essays you will have to write more and also make some paragraphs.
The modern world technology is all making things easily available. Internet has provided us the essay downloadable versions of most books we need. Can internet world replace the world of books and words? Give your views.
8/10 TOEFL score 24 has provided us
8/10
See lessTOEFL score 24
has provided us
Life was simpler without so much of technology. Give your views in not less than 250 words.
9/10
9/10
See lessSome authors believe that urbanisation is a ‘Modern Disease’
6/10 Your essays require proofreading
6/10
See lessYour essays require proofreading
Some people believe that only pupils of similar interests should be given admissions in schools.Others are of the opinions that schools should be open to all children with varied interests. How far you agree or disagree with the above views. Give your opnion in not less than 250 words.
5/10
5/10
See lessChildren are the impressions of their parent’s behavior. If a child behaves badly his parents should be considered responsible and should be punished. How far you agree?
7/10
7/10
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