22/30 * This is a very well-written essay but I am surprised to see that you are not following the proper pattern regardless of the fact that I did it many times.
22/30
* This is a very well-written essay but I am surprised to see that you are not following the proper pattern regardless of the fact that I did it many times.
19/20 everyone wants to people do not like * Never agree or disagree to a point of view in the first paragraph. You have the tendency and potential to reach 25/30
19/20
everyone wants to
people do not like
* Never agree or disagree to a point of view in the first paragraph. You have the tendency and potential to reach 25/30
19/30 Games may render manifold benefits for those who indulge in them. Games teach us Playing games improves Everybody wants * Many Grammatical errors
19/30
Games may render manifold benefits for those who indulge in them.
Games teach us
Playing games improves
Everybody wants
Band 6.5 lack of motivation is depriving "I" will always be in capital letter You have ambiguity regarding the topic as comics is not always about funny stories, they are actually books with pictures.
Band 6.5
lack of motivation is depriving
“I” will always be in capital letter
You have ambiguity regarding the topic as comics is not always about funny stories, they are actually books with pictures.
Band 5 Yes Mr. Rashid is right. A certain pattern is required for IELTS essay. You have to write down an argumentative essay and this is no where near argumentative essay.
Band 5
Yes Mr. Rashid is right. A certain pattern is required for IELTS essay. You have to write down an argumentative essay and this is no where near argumentative essay.
Some people believe that college and university education should be available to all the students. Some believe that it should be available only for high grade students? Give your opinion. Which view do you agree with?
24/30
24/30
See lesswe all work with different kinds of people . In your opinion what are the characteristics of good co workers.
22/30 Proofread before submitting *I will discuss your writing style in the class
22/30
Proofread before submitting
*I will discuss your writing style in the class
See lessIs it better for the children to grow up in country side than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?
22/30 * This is a very well-written essay but I am surprised to see that you are not following the proper pattern regardless of the fact that I did it many times.
22/30
* This is a very well-written essay but I am surprised to see that you are not following the proper pattern regardless of the fact that I did it many times.
See lessIt has been recently announced that a cinema may be built in your neighborhood ?Do you support or oppose this plan? why…
23/30 If a cinema is built * Your essay was properly planned. Very good!
23/30
If a cinema is built
* Your essay was properly planned. Very good!
See lessIt has recently been announced that the new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan?
15/30 Excellent introduction but very short. If you are writing a essay write a complete one or just write down a paragraph.
15/30
Excellent introduction but very short. If you are writing a essay write a complete one or just write down a paragraph.
See lessDo you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer
19/20 everyone wants to people do not like * Never agree or disagree to a point of view in the first paragraph. You have the tendency and potential to reach 25/30
19/20
everyone wants to
people do not like
* Never agree or disagree to a point of view in the first paragraph. You have the tendency and potential to reach 25/30
See lessDo you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics.
23/30 Nice Effort!
23/30
Nice Effort!
See lessDo you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games teaches us about life.
19/30 Games may render manifold benefits for those who indulge in them. Games teach us Playing games improves Everybody wants * Many Grammatical errors
19/30
Games may render manifold benefits for those who indulge in them.
Games teach us
Playing games improves
Everybody wants
* Many Grammatical errors
See lessDo you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is nothing that young people can teach older people. or Knowledge is better than experience.
22/30 It is almost true but that does not mean * There were digressions in your essay
22/30
It is almost true
but that does not mean
* There were digressions in your essay
See lessReading comics only rot the children’s mind than to provide any good education . Agree/ Disagree.
Band 6.5 lack of motivation is depriving "I" will always be in capital letter You have ambiguity regarding the topic as comics is not always about funny stories, they are actually books with pictures.
Band 6.5
See lesslack of motivation is depriving
“I” will always be in capital letter
You have ambiguity regarding the topic as comics is not always about funny stories, they are actually books with pictures.
Capital punishment is a brutal decision and should be Abolished. Agree/Disagree
Band 7.5 You do not need to prepare at all!
Band 7.5
See lessYou do not need to prepare at all!
Technology
5/10 better than your other paragraphs
5/10
See lessbetter than your other paragraphs
Energy drink’s
4/10
4/10
See lesssmoking should be banned or not we should agree or disagree (300 words)
Band 5
Band 5
See lesssingle parents can do more upbringing their child then the both parents are you agree or disagree (300 words)
Band 5.5
Band 5.5
See lessBavarian Army
6/10
6/10
See lessAustro-Hungarian
3/10
3/10
See lessShandong
4/10
4/10
See lessDepression
3/10
3/10
See lessDisturbance
1/10 you should take admission in class 5 to improve your English Grammar
1/10
See lessyou should take admission in class 5 to improve your English Grammar
Trade with other countries…
3/10
3/10
See lesscrisis in Burma between Muslim and Buddhist.
2/10
2/10
See lessTelevision. T.V
4/10
4/10
See lessboat or canao
3/10 your basic English Grammar is very poor
3/10
See lessyour basic English Grammar is very poor
Love
3/10
3/10
See lessBurger
this is a joke! 3/10 please try to write down proper paragraphs or essays
this is a joke!
See less3/10
please try to write down proper paragraphs or essays
Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of adverising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.to what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are serious flaws in your writing. Your English Grammar is very poor. Band 5.5
There are serious flaws in your writing. Your English Grammar is very poor.
Band 5.5
See lessas most people spend a major part of their adult life at work,job satisfaction is an important. element of individual wellbeing.what factore contribute to job satisfaction? how realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers.
Band 5 Yes Mr. Rashid is right. A certain pattern is required for IELTS essay. You have to write down an argumentative essay and this is no where near argumentative essay.
Band 5
See lessYes Mr. Rashid is right. A certain pattern is required for IELTS essay. You have to write down an argumentative essay and this is no where near argumentative essay.
Being a celebrity-such as famous film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that a being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Band 7
Band 7
See lessSuccessful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
8/10 very good effort!
8/10
See lessvery good effort!
who is the responsible of our old people attitude
6/10
6/10
See lessTechnology developments
7/10 This is a good paragraph
7/10
See lessThis is a good paragraph
satellite
5/10 Grammatical errors which will not be tolerated in the exam.
5/10
See lessGrammatical errors which will not be tolerated in the exam.
energy crises
6/10 better effort
6/10
See lessbetter effort
Co_Education
4/10
4/10
See lessMy favourite dress
3/10
3/10
See lessMy happiest moment in my life
1/10 oh no! This is not an essay. This is a mere message
1/10
See lessoh no!
This is not an essay. This is a mere message
Favorite personality
Mr. Hanan 5/10 Ms. Uzma 8.5/10
Mr. Hanan 5/10
See lessMs. Uzma 8.5/10
Computer
5/10
5/10
See lessHome
5/10
5/10
See lessEducation
Mr. Hanan 6/10 Ms Uzma 8/10
Mr. Hanan 6/10
See lessMs Uzma 8/10
Friend
6/10 you grammatical structure is good, you just need to write more!
6/10
See lessyou grammatical structure is good, you just need to write more!
Mother
5/10 Ms Uzma you wrote it well! Mr. Hanan write more
5/10
See lessMs Uzma you wrote it well!
Mr. Hanan write more
Shinto
6/10 very informative, but it is short
6/10
See lessvery informative, but it is short
Health Facilities
7/10 Good job
7/10
See lessGood job
Childhood
8/10
8/10
See lessElectronics
8.5/10
8.5/10
See lessCorruption
8/10 nice effort
8/10
See lessnice effort
Traffic problems
9.5/10 excellent! some words were used incorrectly
9.5/10
See lessexcellent!
some words were used incorrectly
Favorite Bag
7/10 we need to work more on punctuation
7/10
See lesswe need to work more on punctuation