* I never had a favorite poem (While it is true that many people are living in extremely challenging and appalling conditions.) This sentence needs to be completed. It is a complex sentence, but it is not being connected to another sentence.
* I never had a favorite poem
(While it is true that many people are living in extremely challenging and appalling conditions.)
This sentence needs to be completed. It is a complex sentence, but it is not being connected to another sentence.
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have more than
that could assist
, such as
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it’s the key responsibility
it is every individual’s responsibility to take of his or her surroundings.
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But if this attitude does not change, you will lose customers
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* Money brings happiness his or her needs Not only his or her wishes but all the family's wishes lead a stress-free life ample money ,yet they feel so lonely money fails to provide
* Money brings happiness
his or her needs
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lead a stress-free life
ample money
,yet they feel so lonely
money fails to provide
TA:7.0 CC:7.0-8.0 GRA: 6.0-7.0 LR: 7.0 Overall: 6.5-7.0 * that should be completed at home their benefits the advantages outweigh the disadvantages , such as What is this sentence? regularly top international educational league tables and out perform nations where setting homework is the norm. has iRead more
* that should be completed at home
their benefits
the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
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regularly top international educational league tables and out perform nations where setting homework is the norm.
has its drawbacks
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*open
, so they are not
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(The complications in a society are motivated to improve through these types of movies. )
are obliging to comprehend the
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*middle-class
,but as time goes on
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These personnel who are new to youth chose shortcut routes to get rich and have these items, due to lack of money and resources.
* It even exists in local families these days has totally changed Most of the people like to live alone They do not want others to interfere in their privacy Wrong Sentences Same like these American nations, this kind of behaviour can also be seen in our society like Pakistan Is habitual of followinRead more
* It even exists in local families these days
has totally changed
Most of the people like to live alone
They do not want others to interfere in their privacy
Wrong Sentences
Same like these American nations, this kind of behaviour can also be seen in our society like Pakistan
Is habitual of following this concept
They tend to live separately
According to the survey,
Men live separately with their wives and children
Wrong sentence
abolisg the esquisite system of families
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*To pursue the dream of acquiring incomparable education and to equip one’s self with matchless skills,
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abroad shows that either quality of education is been compromised, lack of facilities or limited opportunities are available for higher education in the country.
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but are only capitulate when government is well prepared to accommodate those students at a position from where they can bring change.
foreign qualified students
backbone
Their talent must be used
Wrong sentences
It is significant to endorse those students by accumulating them in the main stream of the country, at such positions from where their knowledge can be fully utilized and optimized.
* In the last few years, You had to talk about the reasons why people migrate This sentence is wrong (As its becoming popular in our country for people to migrate from villages to developed cities ,and due to which urban conurbations are rising wisely.) This entire paragraph is grammatically incorreRead more
* In the last few years,
You had to talk about the reasons why people migrate
This sentence is wrong
(As its becoming popular in our country for people to migrate from villages to developed cities ,and due to which urban conurbations are rising wisely.)
This entire paragraph is grammatically incorrect
(Furthermore, by moving from villages to cities cause heavy traffic issues since there are lots of people who have to commute in public transport.The buses are filled with the lot of people ,and fare rate also increases since there are more buses require for people to travel from one place to another.)
You have to write this essay again. It is entirely incorrect. Please send me a message on Whatsapp, so that I could call you and discuss this essay.
* He is actually the same age as me He performs his We often discuss important matters with each other (avoided brim-full places) What is this? We are trying to make new chemicals by collaborating with each other Some of the words have been used incorrectly
* He is actually the same age as me
He performs his
We often discuss important matters with each other
(avoided brim-full places) What is this?
We are trying to make new chemicals by collaborating with each other
* ,and he has to bear the responsibilities of the family He has always been able to create a work-life balance He is affable towards me or He has an affable nature He never ridicules me
* ,and he has to bear the responsibilities of the family
He has always been able to create a work-life balance
He is affable towards me or He has an affable nature
He never ridicules me
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Especially,
,so children can
However, when children grow up, their ability to understand and analyze things also increases.
it or not because the learning
I like to explore countless places which mesmerize me I feel relaxed attract me and I would regard myself to be a compulsive buyer I like the brands which are affordable
I like to explore countless places
which mesmerize me
I feel relaxed
attract me and I would regard myself to be a compulsive buyer
I like the brands which are affordable
Short Paragraph on my favorite color
* dollhouse My friends asked me
* dollhouse
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Short Paragraph on my favorite music
*, such as might not be familiar I have an affinity for music, and I have a strong inclination to play the piano. it specifies and soothes me
*, such as
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I have an affinity for music, and I have a strong inclination to play the piano.
it specifies and soothes me
Short Paragraph on my favorite poem
* I never had a favorite poem (While it is true that many people are living in extremely challenging and appalling conditions.) This sentence needs to be completed. It is a complex sentence, but it is not being connected to another sentence.
* I never had a favorite poem
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This sentence needs to be completed. It is a complex sentence, but it is not being connected to another sentence.
Short Paragraph on my favorite poet
* He is not only a poet but also as his language is as his idea he has shown us
* He is not only a poet but also
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Write a letter to the librarian
TA:7.0-8.0 CC:7.0 GRA:6.0 LR:7.0 *to seek an apology , which you issued Last Thursday, , and it helped me a lot (Do not use if with then) Lastly, cooperation
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*to seek an apology
, which you issued
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, and it helped me a lot
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cooperation
See lessScientist believe that in order to protect the environment,people must use less energy in their daily lives.However,most people have not changes the way they live .Why do you think many people have not taken individual action? What should be done to encourage them to take action?
TA:7.0 GRA:6.0 LR:7.0 CC:6.0 Overall: 6.5 You should have divided the second paragraph * devise a plan in this modern era have more than that could assist , such as improved up to 70% it's the key responsibility it is every individual's responsibility to take of his or her surroundings.
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have more than
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, such as
improved up to 70%
it’s the key responsibility
it is every individual’s responsibility to take of his or her surroundings.
Films and computers games which contains violence are very popular. Some people believe that they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people , however , say they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both these point of views and give your own opinion
TA:7.0-8.0 GRA:6.0 CC:7.0 LR:6.0-7.0 Overall: 6.5 *pays negative (have a negative effect) (believe that it effects worse ,and should be banned.) (and should be diminish for being on aired) well-known it was published there is a list of movies baby's day out It depends on
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it was published
there is a list of movies
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Write a letter to the manager of a restaurant to complain about the staff. What was the issue? How did the staff react? What reaction do you expect from the manager?
Paragraphing is also very important
Paragraphing is also very important
See lessWrite a letter to the manager of a restaurant to complain about the staff. What was the issue? How did the staff react? What reaction do you expect from the manager?
TA:8.0 CC:6.0-7.0 GRA:8.0 LR:8.0 Overall: 7.0-7.5 *complain (If you had used linking devices, your score would have been 8.0)
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*complain
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Excellent!
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improve hospitality
Short Paragraph on Favourite of musicians
*who got fame has the ability to mesmerize people admire him
*who got fame
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admire him
Short Paragraph on Favourite Number
* I
* I
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Good!
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I want you to write this one again.
I want you to write this one again.
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* I have read struggles and endeavors to get a I had never read
* I have read
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I had never read
Short Paragraph on Favourite Novel
*well-known The novel basically revolves around I was enlightened after reading the novel
*well-known
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I was enlightened after reading the novel
Short Paragraph on Favourite Ad
*the brother prepares impart the message no matter what happens
*the brother prepares
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no matter what happens
Short Paragraph on Favourite internet ad
normally become annoying while we are watching them, mouth-watering well-known
normally become annoying while we are watching them,
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Short Paragraph on Favourite snack
*light-weight As I am very much concerned, sugar-free
*light-weight
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sugar-free
Short note on Favorite Short Story
* was so impressed with his honesty that he rewarded him
* was so impressed with his honesty that he rewarded him
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*well-trained is now one of my favorite airlines
*well-trained
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Paragraph on my favorite river
*eye-catching ; moreover, it was one of my memorable trips
*eye-catching
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it was one of my memorable trips
Paragraph on my favorite river
*eye-catching ; moreover, it was one of memorable trips
*eye-catching
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it was one of memorable trips
Paragraph on my favorite garden
* It has manifold benefits the smell of flowers refreshes me
* It has manifold benefits
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Paragraph on my favorite mall
*one of my favorite malls I love this mall
*one of my favorite malls
See lessI love this mall
Paragraph on my favorite perfume
* One day, First, I was confused about whether I should buy it or not one of my friends
* One day,
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one of my friends
Paragraph on my favorite animal
*lion in my favorite animal it is called the king of the jungle lion has a muscular body it can climb trees and hide itself
*lion in my favorite animal
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lion has a muscular body
it can climb trees and hide itself
These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
TA:7.0 GRA:7.0 LR:7.0 CC:7.0 Overall:7.0 have changed the world order
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have changed the world order
See lessMany people think that more money will make them happier. How important is money for happiness?
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See lessMany people think that more money will make them happier. How important is money for happiness?
* Money brings happiness his or her needs Not only his or her wishes but all the family's wishes lead a stress-free life ample money ,yet they feel so lonely money fails to provide
* Money brings happiness
See lesshis or her needs
Not only his or her wishes but all the family’s wishes
lead a stress-free life
ample money
,yet they feel so lonely
money fails to provide
A life changing moment (it’s a story)
*6-year old grandfather 3-year old Amazing story!
*6-year old
grandfather
3-year old
Amazing story!
See lessIELTS Band 7 Sample Essay: Some people are of the opinion that art is an essential topic for children to learn at school, while others believe it should not be studied at school at all. Discuss both side of the issues and give your opinion.
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Some people think that children should not be given homework while others believe that they must get homework every day in order to achieve highly at school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
TA:7.0 CC:7.0-8.0 GRA: 6.0-7.0 LR: 7.0 Overall: 6.5-7.0 * that should be completed at home their benefits the advantages outweigh the disadvantages , such as What is this sentence? regularly top international educational league tables and out perform nations where setting homework is the norm. has iRead more
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LR: 7.0
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* that should be completed at home
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the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
, such as
What is this sentence?
regularly top international educational league tables and out perform nations where setting homework is the norm.
has its drawbacks
IELTS Essay Band 7: Some people think watching movies is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?
*open , so they are not What is this sentence? (The complications in a society are motivated to improve through these types of movies. ) are obliging to comprehend the TA: 7.0-8.0 LR: 7.0 GRA: 7.0 CC: 7.0 Overall: 7.0
*open
, so they are not
What is this sentence?
(The complications in a society are motivated to improve through these types of movies. )
are obliging to comprehend the
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Paragraph on my favorite type of dance is Ballet Dance
* Dance has remained manifold types of dances on their bodies
* Dance has remained
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on their bodies
Paragraph on my Favorite Leader Nelson Mandela
* Word history has had Amazing paragraph!!
* Word history has had
Amazing paragraph!!
See lessIELTS Sample Band 7 Essay: Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. Do you agree or disagree?
*middle-class ,but as time goes on ;moreover, Sometimes, These personnel who are new to youth chose shortcut routes to get rich and have these items, due to lack of money and resources. TA: 7.0-8.0 GRA: 7.0 LR: 7.0 CC: 7.0 Overall: 7.0
*middle-class
,but as time goes on
;moreover,
Sometimes,
These personnel who are new to youth chose shortcut routes to get rich and have these items, due to lack of money and resources.
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LR: 7.0
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* can't be replaced As he brought me up, I cannot repay the love she has given me My mother always
* can’t be replaced
See lessAs he brought me up, I cannot repay the love she has given me
My mother always
In recent times, many people prefer to live akone. What are the reasons for this and does it have posisitive or negative effect on society
* It even exists in local families these days has totally changed Most of the people like to live alone They do not want others to interfere in their privacy Wrong Sentences Same like these American nations, this kind of behaviour can also be seen in our society like Pakistan Is habitual of followinRead more
* It even exists in local families these days
has totally changed
Most of the people like to live alone
They do not want others to interfere in their privacy
Wrong Sentences
Same like these American nations, this kind of behaviour can also be seen in our society like Pakistan
Is habitual of following this concept
They tend to live separately
According to the survey,
Men live separately with their wives and children
Wrong sentence
abolisg the esquisite system of families
imbalanced society
TA: 4.0
GRA: 4.0-5.0
LR: 5.0
CC: 4.0
Overall: 4.5
See lessEach year increasing number of students is deciding to move to a different country for higher education. Do you think the benefit of this outweigh the problem
*To pursue the dream of acquiring incomparable education and to equip one’s self with matchless skills, This sentence is wrong abroad shows that either quality of education is been compromised, lack of facilities or limited opportunities are available for higher education in the country. Wrong senteRead more
*To pursue the dream of acquiring incomparable education and to equip one’s self with matchless skills,
This sentence is wrong
abroad shows that either quality of education is been compromised, lack of facilities or limited opportunities are available for higher education in the country.
Wrong sentence
but are only capitulate when government is well prepared to accommodate those students at a position from where they can bring change.
foreign qualified students
backbone
Their talent must be used
Wrong sentences
It is significant to endorse those students by accumulating them in the main stream of the country, at such positions from where their knowledge can be fully utilized and optimized.
TA: 6.0
GRA: 5.0
LR: 6.0
CC: 5.0
Overall: 5.5
See lessThe migration of people from rural communities to large developed cities is increasing in many developing countries.Why do you think this happens or not and what problems can cause?
* In the last few years, You had to talk about the reasons why people migrate This sentence is wrong (As its becoming popular in our country for people to migrate from villages to developed cities ,and due to which urban conurbations are rising wisely.) This entire paragraph is grammatically incorreRead more
* In the last few years,
You had to talk about the reasons why people migrate
This sentence is wrong
(As its becoming popular in our country for people to migrate from villages to developed cities ,and due to which urban conurbations are rising wisely.)
This entire paragraph is grammatically incorrect
(Furthermore, by moving from villages to cities cause heavy traffic issues since there are lots of people who have to commute in public transport.The buses are filled with the lot of people ,and fare rate also increases since there are more buses require for people to travel from one place to another.)
You have to write this essay again. It is entirely incorrect. Please send me a message on Whatsapp, so that I could call you and discuss this essay.
See lessOur school Tuck Shop
* Whenever I feel greedy Our school tuck shop has good The shopkeeper has an affable personality
* Whenever I feel greedy
See lessOur school tuck shop has good
The shopkeeper has an affable personality
Short paragraph on my favorite cousin
* He is actually the same age as me He performs his We often discuss important matters with each other (avoided brim-full places) What is this? We are trying to make new chemicals by collaborating with each other Some of the words have been used incorrectly
* He is actually the same age as me
He performs his
We often discuss important matters with each other
(avoided brim-full places) What is this?
We are trying to make new chemicals by collaborating with each other
Some of the words have been used incorrectly
See lessShort article on why I love my father
* ,and he has to bear the responsibilities of the family He has always been able to create a work-life balance He is affable towards me or He has an affable nature He never ridicules me
* ,and he has to bear the responsibilities of the family
See lessHe has always been able to create a work-life balance
He is affable towards me or He has an affable nature
He never ridicules me
Short paragraph on my favorite food: Pasta
*One should try it as it can provide sheer pleasure
*One should try it as it can provide sheer pleasure
See lessShort article on why I love my mother
*,and she is only one who showers true love and has very effective managerial skills fulfills our
*,and
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and has very effective managerial skills
fulfills our
Short Paragraph on my Favorite Place in the world: Dubai
,but my how beautiful Dubai is ,but , and I have grown some
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,but
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Short article on why I love my father
* sole breadwinner God-fearing self-confidence This was an excellent paragraph!
* sole breadwinner
God-fearing
self-confidence
This was an excellent paragraph!
See lessIELTS Essay Topic: Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents needn’t do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. Discuss the both views and give your own opinion.
Especially, ,so children can However, when children grow up, their ability to understand and analyze things also increases. it or not because the learning TA:8.0 GRA:7.0 CC:7.0-8.0 LR:7.0 Overall: 7.0-7.5 Very good essay!
Especially,
,so children can
However, when children grow up, their ability to understand and analyze things also increases.
it or not because the learning
TA:8.0
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CC:7.0-8.0
LR:7.0
Overall: 7.0-7.5
Very good essay!
See lessParagraph on My Favourite outdoor activity
I like to explore countless places which mesmerize me I feel relaxed attract me and I would regard myself to be a compulsive buyer I like the brands which are affordable
I like to explore countless places
See lesswhich mesmerize me
I feel relaxed
attract me and I would regard myself to be a compulsive buyer
I like the brands which are affordable