Different- Myriad One of the crucial tasks It can be perceived from the past When a business fails to meet its standards, it would lead to loss of customers and reduction in sales. Lucrative ideas 7/10
Different- Myriad
One of the crucial tasks
It can be perceived from the past
When a business fails to meet its standards, it would lead to loss of customers and reduction in sales.
Lucrative ideas
Also a creation of God Animals are more faithful than humans Animals also provide us food Animals also have emotions and they also feel pain. It is wrong to give them so much pain Please check your essay again and submit it again. I have corrected some of the mistakes, but I would require you to looRead more
Also a creation of God
Animals are more faithful than humans
Animals also provide us food
Animals also have emotions and they also feel pain.
It is wrong to give them so much pain
Please check your essay again and submit it again. I have corrected some of the mistakes, but I would require you to look at all the mistakes.
Band 7.5 Their physiology and inside anamtomy does somewhat resemble us despite of the external body shape and appearance. Animal experiments include:injecting or force feeding animals with potentially harmful substances, exposing animals to radiation, surgically removing animals’ organs or tissuesRead more
Band 7.5
Their physiology and inside anamtomy does somewhat resemble us despite of the external body shape and appearance. Animal experiments include:injecting or force feeding animals with potentially harmful substances, exposing animals to radiation, surgically removing animals’ organs or tissues to deliberately cause damage, forcing animals to inhale toxic gases, subjecting animals to frightening situations to create anxiety and depression. Laboratories are not suitable places for animals. They are typically sterile, indoor environments in which the animals are forced to live in cages and denied complete freedom of movement also control over their lives. Some animals in laboratories are confined on their own, without the companionship of others. They are smuggled to other countries as well and after specific experiments they are being left to die on their own.
* He is also my neighbor and I spent we played together we had many memories we went to school together he is very honest and kind he did matric he did not have interest in studies he was interested in making electronic devices
* He is also my neighbor
and I spent
we played together
we had many memories
we went to school together
he is very honest and kind
he did matric
he did not have interest in studies
he was interested in making electronic devices
* for their survival animal right ,but the story does not end here product testing has already been banned Band 6 You should have also told the opinion of those who are against it. Against Here is a short list of important medical advances achieved through animal research and the animals to which weRead more
* for their survival
animal right
,but the story does not end here
product testing has already been banned
Band 6
You should have also told the opinion of those who are against it.
Against
Here is a short list of important medical advances achieved through animal research and the animals to which we give credit.
1726 First Measurement of Blood Pressure (Horse)
1790 Vaccine for Smallpox Developed (Cow)
1880 Vaccine for Anthrax Developed (Sheep)
1888 Vaccine for Rabies Developed (Dog, Rabbit)
* It is easy to determine the ability or enthusiasm of a person after knowing about his or her age. We cannot gainsay the fact They are able to fathom At a young age in physical activities In every society there are organizations which hire aged people as the old people can render much better servicRead more
* It is easy to determine the ability or enthusiasm of a person after knowing about his or her age.
We cannot gainsay the fact
They are able to fathom
At a young age
in physical activities
In every society there are organizations which hire aged people as the old people can render much better services due to their experiences.
* People of the world are using different modes of transportation Better transportation helps us commute faster Many countries in the world are facing the problem of traffic jam. Cars have increased and the government has failed to solve this problem. Our public transportation is severely damaged FeRead more
* People of the world are using different modes of transportation
Better transportation helps us commute faster
Many countries in the world are facing the problem of traffic jam.
Cars have increased and the government has failed to solve this problem.
Our public transportation is severely damaged
Few years ago the government started the metro bus service
Note-There would be no benefit of writing it unless you make the corrections. There were about 50 errors in the essay. Please rectify them and learn from your mistakes.
*Mobile phone is considered Everyone has mobile phones and are improving day by day This mobile phone was launched by Samsung a few months ago Salients features of the phone are slim shape and good touch system. Please write it again after rectifying the mistakes.
*Mobile phone is considered
Everyone has mobile phones
and are improving day by day
This mobile phone was launched by Samsung a few months ago
Salients features of the phone are slim shape and good touch system.
Please write it again after rectifying the mistakes.
But some teacher have been very special to me. The role of a teacher in a person's life is immense importance. He is my favorite teacher because his teaching methodology was very impressive. I learnt how to be disciplined from him.
But some teacher have been very special to me. The role of a teacher in a person’s life is immense importance.
He is my favorite teacher because his teaching methodology was very impressive.
Delegation is the process of assigning work to another person. It is simply impossible for a person to perform all the tasks himself or herself so the work is delegated.
Delegation is the process of assigning work to another person. It is simply impossible for a person to perform all the tasks himself or herself so the work is delegated.
TA-7.0 CC-6.5 GRA-6.5 LR-7.0 In order to make complex sentence structure, you have made wrong sentences. Please avoid them. Most people denounce the interference of government agencies in their private matters.
TA-7.0
CC-6.5
GRA-6.5
LR-7.0
In order to make complex sentence structure, you have made wrong sentences. Please avoid them.
Most people denounce the interference of government agencies in their private matters.
To only study would lead to boredom. There are always some activities which could prove refreshing One of the most entertaining activities Would be a bad decision Principal He must ruminate about the decision If the students get frustrated by the studies they might not perform on full efficiency ItRead more
To only study would lead to boredom.
There are always some activities which could prove refreshing
One of the most entertaining activities
Would be a bad decision
Principal
He must ruminate about the decision
If the students get frustrated by the studies they might not perform on full efficiency
It is psychologically proven
Cumbersome tasks may overburden the students thus result in lower productivity.
This is a very well-written essay, but the essay did not require you to state the steps which should be taken to stop this practice. You had to either agree or disagree with it. TA-5 GRA-7.5 LR-7.5 CC-6 Overall 6.5
This is a very well-written essay, but the essay did not require you to state the steps which should be taken to stop this practice. You had to either agree or disagree with it.
has emerged whether we should change the retirement age or not and secondly There are some professions which entail physically more arduous or cumbersome TA-7 CC-7 GRA-6.5 LR-6.5 Overall 6.5 to 7
has emerged
whether we should change the retirement age or not
and secondly
There are some professions which entail
physically more arduous or cumbersome
*creations several kinds myriad ways instead of numerous ways some animals are being sacrificed or killed for their meat and others are being used a modes of transportation. birth to children use inhibited instead of prohibited (There is very less reference made regarding pharmaceutical companies) BRead more
*creations
several kinds
myriad ways instead of numerous ways
some animals are being sacrificed or killed for their meat and others are being used a modes of transportation.
birth to children
use inhibited instead of prohibited
(There is very less reference made regarding pharmaceutical companies)
Band 6
Essay on business
Different- Myriad One of the crucial tasks It can be perceived from the past When a business fails to meet its standards, it would lead to loss of customers and reduction in sales. Lucrative ideas 7/10
Different- Myriad
One of the crucial tasks
It can be perceived from the past
When a business fails to meet its standards, it would lead to loss of customers and reduction in sales.
Lucrative ideas
7/10
See less2. Animals also have emotions and feel equal pain as humans. We should stop all pharmaceutical companies from doing trials on innocent animals. Give your opinion in not less than 250 words.
Also a creation of God Animals are more faithful than humans Animals also provide us food Animals also have emotions and they also feel pain. It is wrong to give them so much pain Please check your essay again and submit it again. I have corrected some of the mistakes, but I would require you to looRead more
Also a creation of God
Animals are more faithful than humans
Animals also provide us food
Animals also have emotions and they also feel pain.
It is wrong to give them so much pain
Please check your essay again and submit it again. I have corrected some of the mistakes, but I would require you to look at all the mistakes.
See lessAnimals also have emotions and feel equal pain as humans. We should stop all pharmaceutical companies from doing trials on innocent animals. Give your opinion in not less than 250 words.
*Which might threaten the lives of animals Most people agree Sometimes No one has the right Should avoid giving Band 6.0 to 6.5
*Which might threaten the lives of animals
Most people agree
Sometimes
No one has the right
Should avoid giving
Band 6.0 to 6.5
See less2. Animals also have emotions and feel equal pain as humans. We should stop all pharmaceutical companies from doing trials on innocent animals. Give your opinion in not less than 250 words.
Band 7.5 Their physiology and inside anamtomy does somewhat resemble us despite of the external body shape and appearance. Animal experiments include:injecting or force feeding animals with potentially harmful substances, exposing animals to radiation, surgically removing animals’ organs or tissuesRead more
Band 7.5
Their physiology and inside anamtomy does somewhat resemble us despite of the external body shape and appearance. Animal experiments include:injecting or force feeding animals with potentially harmful substances, exposing animals to radiation, surgically removing animals’ organs or tissues to deliberately cause damage, forcing animals to inhale toxic gases, subjecting animals to frightening situations to create anxiety and depression. Laboratories are not suitable places for animals. They are typically sterile, indoor environments in which the animals are forced to live in cages and denied complete freedom of movement also control over their lives. Some animals in laboratories are confined on their own, without the companionship of others. They are smuggled to other countries as well and after specific experiments they are being left to die on their own.
(You could have made this thing concise)
See less1.There is an age after which one’s efficiency decreases. Should young people in the working fields replace all the old people?
TA-8.5 CC-7.5 GRA-8 LR-7.5 Overall 7.5 to 8 Excellent essay!
TA-8.5
CC-7.5
GRA-8
LR-7.5
Overall 7.5 to 8
Excellent essay!
See less2. Animals also have emotions and feel equal pain as humans. We should stop all pharmaceutical companies from doing trials on innocent animals. Give your opinion in not less than 250 words.
5/9 I will give suggestions tomorrow
5/9
I will give suggestions tomorrow
See less2. Animals also have emotions and feel equal pain as humans. We should stop all pharmaceutical companies from doing trials on innocent animals. Give your opinion in not less than 250 words.
7/9 I will give comments tomorrow
7/9
I will give comments tomorrow
See lessAnimals also have emotions and feel equal pain as humans. We should stop all pharmaceutical companies from doing trials on innocent animals.
5/9
5/9
See lessThere is an age after which one’s efficiency decreases. Should young people in the working fields replace all the old people?
Nice try! I will the comments tomorrow 5.5/9
Nice try!
I will the comments tomorrow
5.5/9
See less1.There is an age after which one’s efficiency decreases. Should young people in the working fields replace all the old people?
Band 6.5
Band 6.5
See less1.There is an age after which one’s efficiency decreases. Should young people in the working fields replace all the old people?
*hence the decrease in efficiency results TA 8 CC 7.5 GRA 7.5 LR 7.5 Very good Overall 7.5 to 8.0
*hence the decrease in efficiency results
TA 8
CC 7.5
GRA 7.5
LR 7.5
Very good Overall 7.5 to 8.0
See lessFavorite cousin
* He is also my neighbor and I spent we played together we had many memories we went to school together he is very honest and kind he did matric he did not have interest in studies he was interested in making electronic devices
* He is also my neighbor
See lessand I spent
we played together
we had many memories
we went to school together
he is very honest and kind
he did matric
he did not have interest in studies
he was interested in making electronic devices
Animals also have emotions and feel equal pain as humans. We should stop all pharmaceutical companies from doing trials on innocent animals.
* for their survival animal right ,but the story does not end here product testing has already been banned Band 6 You should have also told the opinion of those who are against it. Against Here is a short list of important medical advances achieved through animal research and the animals to which weRead more
* for their survival
animal right
,but the story does not end here
product testing has already been banned
Band 6
You should have also told the opinion of those who are against it.
Against
See lessHere is a short list of important medical advances achieved through animal research and the animals to which we give credit.
1726 First Measurement of Blood Pressure (Horse)
1790 Vaccine for Smallpox Developed (Cow)
1880 Vaccine for Anthrax Developed (Sheep)
1888 Vaccine for Rabies Developed (Dog, Rabbit)
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* It is easy to determine the ability or enthusiasm of a person after knowing about his or her age. We cannot gainsay the fact They are able to fathom At a young age in physical activities In every society there are organizations which hire aged people as the old people can render much better servicRead more
* It is easy to determine the ability or enthusiasm of a person after knowing about his or her age.
See lessWe cannot gainsay the fact
They are able to fathom
At a young age
in physical activities
In every society there are organizations which hire aged people as the old people can render much better services due to their experiences.
Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam
* People of the world are using different modes of transportation Better transportation helps us commute faster Many countries in the world are facing the problem of traffic jam. Cars have increased and the government has failed to solve this problem. Our public transportation is severely damaged FeRead more
* People of the world are using different modes of transportation
Better transportation helps us commute faster
Many countries in the world are facing the problem of traffic jam.
Cars have increased and the government has failed to solve this problem.
Our public transportation is severely damaged
Few years ago the government started the metro bus service
Note-There would be no benefit of writing it unless you make the corrections. There were about 50 errors in the essay. Please rectify them and learn from your mistakes.
See lessmy favorite tv actor (paragraph)
*I like to The drama was captivating Made me a fan of her After that I have always had alacrity to watch her drama
*I like to
See lessThe drama was captivating
Made me a fan of her
After that I have always had alacrity to watch her drama
There is an age after which one’s efficiency decreases. Should young people in the working fields replace all the old people?
* Witnesses Difficult-Cumbersome TA-7.5 CC-7.0 GRA-6.5 LR-6.5 Overall 7
* Witnesses
Difficult-Cumbersome
TA-7.5
CC-7.0
GRA-6.5
LR-6.5
Overall 7
See lessThere is an age after which one’s efficiency decreases. Should young people in the working fields replace all the old people?
*If you leave Can lead TA-6.5 CC-6.5 LR-6.0 GRA-6.0 Overall 6.5
*If you leave
Can lead
TA-6.5
CC-6.5
LR-6.0
GRA-6.0
Overall 6.5
See lessWomen are always better parents than men. How far you agree with this? Give your opinion.
Understand-Fathom TA-7.5 CC-7.0 GRA-7.5 LR-7.5 Overall 7.5
Understand-Fathom
TA-7.5
CC-7.0
GRA-7.5
LR-7.5
Overall 7.5
See lessFavorite River
I like travelling Travelling could also be called my hobby The beauty of the place attracted me View was captivating
I like travelling
See lessTravelling could also be called my hobby
The beauty of the place attracted me
View was captivating
favorite mobile phone
*Mobile phone is considered Everyone has mobile phones and are improving day by day This mobile phone was launched by Samsung a few months ago Salients features of the phone are slim shape and good touch system. Please write it again after rectifying the mistakes.
*Mobile phone is considered
Everyone has mobile phones
and are improving day by day
This mobile phone was launched by Samsung a few months ago
Salients features of the phone are slim shape and good touch system.
Please write it again after rectifying the mistakes.
See less(my favorite teacher) paragraph
But some teacher have been very special to me. The role of a teacher in a person's life is immense importance. He is my favorite teacher because his teaching methodology was very impressive. I learnt how to be disciplined from him.
But some teacher have been very special to me. The role of a teacher in a person’s life is immense importance.
He is my favorite teacher because his teaching methodology was very impressive.
I learnt how to be disciplined from him.
See lessdelegation
Delegation is the process of assigning work to another person. It is simply impossible for a person to perform all the tasks himself or herself so the work is delegated.
Delegation is the process of assigning work to another person. It is simply impossible for a person to perform all the tasks himself or herself so the work is delegated.
See lessWalled city
*Its population fluctuates Why did you mention Hong Kong? I was not able to understand the reference to Hong Kong. Please write it again.
*Its population fluctuates
Why did you mention Hong Kong?
See lessI was not able to understand the reference to Hong Kong. Please write it again.
USA nuclear budget
This is too short. Please write it again
This is too short. Please write it again
See lessDeciding the size of one’s own family is a personal preference. In your opinion should government intervene in the rights of the individual with regard to family planning?
TA-7.0 CC-6.5 GRA-6.5 LR-7.0 In order to make complex sentence structure, you have made wrong sentences. Please avoid them. Most people denounce the interference of government agencies in their private matters.
TA-7.0
CC-6.5
GRA-6.5
LR-7.0
In order to make complex sentence structure, you have made wrong sentences. Please avoid them.
Most people denounce the interference of government agencies in their private matters.
See lessIn order to save money, your principal is thinking about canceling all field trips for the remainder of the year. Write an essay persuading him or her to allow students to continue attending field trips. Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
To only study would lead to boredom. There are always some activities which could prove refreshing One of the most entertaining activities Would be a bad decision Principal He must ruminate about the decision If the students get frustrated by the studies they might not perform on full efficiency ItRead more
To only study would lead to boredom.
There are always some activities which could prove refreshing
One of the most entertaining activities
Would be a bad decision
Principal
He must ruminate about the decision
If the students get frustrated by the studies they might not perform on full efficiency
It is psychologically proven
Cumbersome tasks may overburden the students thus result in lower productivity.
Make the improvements and write it down again.
See lessAnimals also have emotions and feel equal pain as humans. We should stop all pharmaceutical companies from doing trials on innocent animals. Give your opinion in not less than 250 words.
This is a very well-written essay, but the essay did not require you to state the steps which should be taken to stop this practice. You had to either agree or disagree with it. TA-5 GRA-7.5 LR-7.5 CC-6 Overall 6.5
This is a very well-written essay, but the essay did not require you to state the steps which should be taken to stop this practice. You had to either agree or disagree with it.
TA-5
GRA-7.5
LR-7.5
CC-6
Overall 6.5
See lessThere is an age after which one’s efficiency decreases. Should young people in the working fields replace all the old people?
has emerged whether we should change the retirement age or not and secondly There are some professions which entail physically more arduous or cumbersome TA-7 CC-7 GRA-6.5 LR-6.5 Overall 6.5 to 7
has emerged
whether we should change the retirement age or not
and secondly
There are some professions which entail
physically more arduous or cumbersome
TA-7
CC-7
GRA-6.5
LR-6.5
Overall 6.5 to 7
See lessThe threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far overweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.
7.5 Best essay yet from you
7.5
See lessBest essay yet from you
Animals also have emotions and feel equal pain as humans. We should stop all pharmaceutical companies from doing trials on innocent animals. Give your opinion in not less than 250 words.
Excellent essay! 7.0 to 7.5
Excellent essay!
See less7.0 to 7.5
There is an age after which one’s efficiency decreases. Should young people in the working fields replace all the old people?
6.5 to 7.0 * As impact of
6.5 to 7.0
See less* As impact of
In some countries the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others people can work until they are 65 or 70. Until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment? Give reasons for your answer.
6.5 * energy levels flag Lack of ideas to prove your point of contention
6.5
* energy levels flag
Lack of ideas to prove your point of contention
See lessInternet has made information so handy, but at the same time, its spoiling our children with all the adult content. Should children be kept away from internet?
7.0 Very good points!
7.0
See lessVery good points!
‘Telecommuting’ refers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of each week and communicating with their office using computer technology. Telecommuting is growing in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming decades. How do you think society will be affected by the growth of telecommuting?
6.5 to 7.0 * major advancements are being made
6.5 to 7.0
See less* major advancements are being made
Internet has made information so handy, but at the same time, it’s spoiling our children with all the adult content. Should children be kept away from internet?
* has nowadays Band 6.5
* has
nowadays
Band 6.5
See lessAnimals also have emotions and feel equal pain as humans. We should stop all pharmaceutical companies from doing trials on innocent animals. Give your opinion in no less than 250 words.
* mimic the diseases? Band 7.5
* mimic the diseases?
Band 7.5
See lessThere is an age after which ones efficiency decreases. Should young people in the working fields replace all the old people?
Band 8 Simply amazing!!!
Band 8
See lessSimply amazing!!!
There are many types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Band 7.5
Band 7.5
See lessSex education in schools are only introducing conflicting ideas and confusion among the immature minds and should be immediately stopped. Give your opinion in not less than 250 words.
* They are ardent Excellent work Band 7.5
* They are ardent
Excellent work Band 7.5
See lessAnimals also have emotions and feel equal pain as humans. We should stop all pharmaceutical companies from doing trials on innocent animals. Give your opinion in not less than 250 words
*creations several kinds myriad ways instead of numerous ways some animals are being sacrificed or killed for their meat and others are being used a modes of transportation. birth to children use inhibited instead of prohibited (There is very less reference made regarding pharmaceutical companies) BRead more
*creations
several kinds
myriad ways instead of numerous ways
some animals are being sacrificed or killed for their meat and others are being used a modes of transportation.
birth to children
use inhibited instead of prohibited
(There is very less reference made regarding pharmaceutical companies)
See lessBand 6
Some authors believe that urbanisation is a ‘Modern Disease’. In not less than 250 words explain if you agree with this view and give your own opinion.
*Ameliorate is not to be used as an adjective It should be used as a verb Band 7.5
*Ameliorate is not to be used as an adjective
It should be used as a verb
Band 7.5
See lessIn order to keep students more focused, the sports class should be stopped in high school
Band 7.5
Band 7.5
See lessMost criminals are set free once they finish their jail terms. Is the re-introduction of criminals in societies is justified? Place your views in no less than 250 words
Band 8. Excellent!
Band 8. Excellent!
See lessShould poor countried continue to receive international aido.
Band 7.5 to 8 You are a very good writer. Excellent work!
Band 7.5 to 8
See lessYou are a very good writer. Excellent work!
Some people believe that only pupils of similar interests should be given admissions in schools.Others are of the opinions that schools should be open to all children with varied interests.How far you agree or disagress with the above views.
Band 7 Excellent work Ms Asifa
Band 7
See lessExcellent work Ms Asifa
Capital punishment is a brutal decision and should be abolished??
Band 6.5 to 7.0
Band 6.5 to 7.0
See lessSome people believe that only pupils of similar interests should be given admissions in schools. Others are of the opinions that schools should be open to all children with varied interests. How far you agree or disagree with the above views. Give your opinion in not less than 250 words
Band 7
Band 7
See lessMoney is the single motivational factor for success in any work field. How far you agree with this?
Band 7.0 to 7.5 Ms Faryal you should now take the exam
Band 7.0 to 7.5
See lessMs Faryal you should now take the exam
The only way to prevent overcrowding in cities is to prevent migration from rural areas. Give your opinion and views.
Band 7.5
Band 7.5
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