Tag: Writing task 02

  • Scientists have been warning for many years about environmental protection and how important it is to limit our personal energy consumption. What are the causes of the over-consumption of electricity? How can people be encouraged to use less energy?

      It has been asserted that it is imperative to utilize electricity wisely. For this reason, Scientists are concerned for many years and urged the public to protect the environment. In this essay, I will discuss the two main reasons for the over consumption of electricity and possible solutions to address the matter, properly.

      To commence with, the primary reason, by and large, of increased use of electricity is that the public is unaware of its’ detrimental impacts on the environment. Because the public is unable to think of electricity use and its’ link with the ill-effects on the environment. To cite an example, global temperature is increasing due to the production of excessive heat from our daily-use electronics such as a refrigerator, a television and other devices. Similarly, another less significant reason is the irresponsible attitude of the people towards environmental protection as the people are not taking predictions of the Scientists seriously.

      Moving forward to, there are two solutions that can motivate the people to minimise energy expenditure. On the first hand, a government need to regulate a policy of reward to those who utilise energy efficiently while punishment for others. To illustrate, a government of Pakistan offer less price of electricity to farmers when they used electricity in the night in order to reduce the burden on the transformers. Another solution is the public awareness programmes to educate the people regarding the negative consequences of over-use of the electronic devices.

      To conclude, I reiterate that the public education and policies by the state are the need of the hour in order to motivate people to use electricity responsibly. The reduced usage of electricity will help the environment in a very positive way.

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  • It’s believed that people who read for pleasure develop their imagination more and acquire better language skills compared to people who prefer watching television. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

    It has been stated that reading habit helps in obtaining better linguistic skills as well as build-up the imagination capability of a person as compared to those who preferred television shows and documentaries. I partially agree with the statement as both reading and watching shows aid language skills and improve imagination.

    To commence with, reading articles in a newspaper improves vocabulary. This is because the editors try to use words that attract the audience. To cite an example, when I start preparing for my IELTS test, I bought a newspaper to look for how the editors write. Also, I try to learn their style of linking words together so that I get my required band. Similarly, reading novels is far more helpful in developing imagination power. As the reader is making a perfect plot in his/her mind what an author is saying. Therefore, the people who read novels avoid watching dramas because the drama plot is not perfect as they are thinking of.

    On the other hand, watching documentaries on Television enables a person to acquire better listening skills and how to pronounce a word. The speakers are usually native, but non-native speakers also have great language skills. To illustrate, the national geographic channel is famous for its’ documentaries. Similarly, people learning English language preferred to watch them in order to enhance their listening skills which are imperative in understanding a language.

    To conclude, I reiterated that both reading and watching television shows boost language abilities as all of the basic elements such as vocabulary, coherence and cohesion, fluency, pronunciation and listening skills are essential to master a particular language.

  • Topic- today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic .what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

      It has been stated that tourists’ flow increased to sites of extreme weather, and the places which are not tourist’s friendly such as Antarctica and Sahara deserts. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of visiting such dangerous places.

      To commence with, the most important, by and large, disadvantage of visiting such places is risks of attack from the wild animals. For this reason, the visitors are required to know how to deal with if they pose a risk to them. To illustrate, Sahara desert is famous for Cobra snakes which prove deadly without immediate medical attention. Also, there is another major problem of less number of residential areas so that travellers are required to have tents which is another burden of extra luggage on the shoulders of the tourists.

      On the other hand, there are also some benefits when one goes to the areas of low facilities. Because the beauty of unseen areas was not manipulated by thousands of tourist who usually make a visit to famous places. To cite an example, the glaciers of Antarctica are huge and amazing which cannot be seen in any other part of the world, and people are reluctant to visit there due to the extreme of weather. Therefore, the unseen areas are worth a visit to have an incredible experience of exploring the unfamiliar world. Similarly, a number of achievement increases when visiting un-famous places.

      To conclude, I reiterated though there may be some risks associated with visiting dangerous places, the sense of accomplishment and looking for beautiful sceneries is worth a visit.

  • Some people think history has little or nothing to offer, while others say the study of the past helps us understand the present. Write on both views and give your opinion, citing examples from your experience.

      It has been asserted that knowing about history is not important, however, some people opposed this view and considered it useful in understanding the current time. In this essay, I will discuss both these views, and why I consider the history can be beneficial in showcasing the present era.

      To commence with, learning about the past is worthless. Because incidents that happened in the past are not going to benefit the current generation. To illustrate, as we know about the World war in which Americans attack Japanese cities, and destroy them so what is the benefit of this information. Although this information is not necessary at all, it can create more hatred in the world. Moreover,, rather than wasting time on history, it is more important to give that time to exploring the world by studying science and technology.

      On the other hand, some people argued that the past events can aid us to interpret the present age. Since the age of our Prophet Muhammad PBUH, Islam predicts that certain changes will happen in the world. As the 9/11 attack, for instance, is predicted in the holy book, Quran, 1400 years ago, people mock these verses at that time but now we have seen the incident. For that reason, I opine that learning of the past is essential as some predictions can really aid the world in understanding of the present age.

    To conclude, I reiterated despite the fact that some people considered learning history a wastage of time while I believe that it is imperative to learn the past in order to understand what is going on in the present-day.

  • There have been many inventions in human history, such as wheels. Some people think the most important thing is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

     It has been asserted that human history is enriched with great discoveries like manufacturing the wheels, the electricity and the motor engines, however, some consider the internet is the most important invention. Although this statement may endorse by some, I completely disagree as the virtual world would not be possible without the inventions of the ancient world like electricity and machines such as the computers and calculators.

    To commence, the internet is not the most important invention of the era. This is because the internet needs an operating system like a computer or a cell phone which were discovered Wayback. To illustrate, a computer was developed in the 1970s, and changed an era of a pen and a paper to a paperless era. Moreover, the computers reduce the number of workers as fewer employers can do more work with the help of a computer. Therefore, the operating systems can be the most important discovery of an era, but not the internet.

    Another invention worth considering is the electricity. If we are living in an era without it, it would be impossible for us to operate the machines. To illustrate, almost all the operating systems require electricity such as the computers, the calculators and even the cars. Now, electric cars have been manufactured and launched in some countries. So, it is the electricity that is more imperative for people rather than the internet.

    To conclude, I reiterate that the internet is not the most important invention, but the electricity and computers which aid the world in the progression. Moreover, the networking is impossible and of no use without the presence of other technologies.

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  • ost of the people in society enjoy watching crime movies and criminal TV programmes. Why do you think people have more interest to watch them ? What is the impact of society due to this?

     It has been asserted that a major number of the communities appreciate the Television shows based on the criminal activities. In this essay, I will discuss a reason for interest in such TV shows and its’ positive and negative influences on the society.

     To commence, it is the thrill and suspense that render the public to watch the crime-based movies and the Television programmes. One cannot predicts what the outcome is going to be. To illustrate, a Bollywood movie, XYZ, is based on a girl, murdered by an unknown culprit, who is the daughter of a famous Doctor. After an hour of a thrilling investigation by a police officer in the movie, her mother is found to be a killer as she was not her biological mother, but adopted child as the Doctor was infertile.

     Moving forward, the television programmes are arranged in a way to give a positive lesson to its’ audience. For instance, a culprit is identified and put behind the bars in most of the programmes. Therefore, the audience feels the fear to commit any type of crime. In addition, the crime-based shows are a good source of entertainment and can prove a good source of releasing the stress of the day.

     On the other hand, such type of TV shows is not without the negative impacts on a society. For example, the teenagers often inspired from the techniques about how to plan a crime and try to imitate the scene. The result is obviously not good, but some commit because they considered real life as a scene of the movie. So, these shows may be considered a source of increasing crime in a society.

     To conclude, I reiterate that the suspense in the crime-based TV shows is the main reason for interest in watching it. While the aforementioned shows can be a source of entertainment, it can influence the society in a negative way which could raise the crime ratio in society.

  • Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies.  How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?

     It has been asserted that a major number  of communities see competitiveness quite optimistically. Although some may disagree with the statement, I believe that competitive nature is the best quality and is a very positive trend which will be discussed in this essay.

     To commence, the competitive nature of an individual produces far more positive impacts. It brings the sense of the responsibility and makes one a little egoistic, a quality that is required to make one master in his work. To cite an example, I always wanted to be the topper of my class back in the university days, and this was the competitive nature that renders me stand among the toppers, and finally, I took a Gold medal in my final year MBBS.

     Moving forward, employers usually prefer the employees who have a competitive nature. The reason is, the competitiveness of the workers make the firm or a company unique among all other corporations. The Bata shoe stores, for instance, top the list in a recent survey published in the Dawn Magazine, Pakistan. The company in the official statement states that we offer bonuses to the employees who compete with other colleagues, therefore, we stand first.

    Moreover, an employer, who is competitive by nature, is able to take risks in his business which help him and the business to prosper more as compared to other non-competitive owners of the firms and corporations.

     To conclude, I reiterate that competitiveness produces a positive influence on the individuals’ performance and make them achieve their goals. Hence competitiveness is a positive trend.

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  • Success is often measured in terms of how much money somebody has earned. Do you think wealth is a good measure of success? How else could we measure whether somebody is successfu or not?

    It has been asserted that people consider wealth as a sign of success, however, there are other ways that are a sign of prosperity as well. In this essay, I will discuss both these views and why I disagree that wealth alone is not a symbol of a successful life.

    To commence, the money is considered the symbol of achievement. This is because the rich people can buy anything they want. The wealth provides its owner success and happiness, for instance, if he is fond of visiting other countries or interested in collecting precious items, he become far more social in order to make contacts with the powerful people which can be helpful in removing the obstacles in the way of more success. For this reason, some think that they are successful due to their assets.

    On the other hand, while the money alone could not be a symbol of success, the health is a more important indicator of the success. To illustrate, a famous Jeweller, XYZ, in our neighborhood is very rich as he owns million-dollar assets, suffers from a disease of raised blood sugar (Diabetes) and high Blood pressure. He told me that I can give any amount of my wealth if someone bargains with a healthy life. So, he is neither happy nor considers himself a successful person despite his assets.

    In my view, I never considered wealth as an indicator of success rather health and happiness is more important to me.

    To conclude, I reiterate that money can buy materials on the planet Earth but not the health which is more important for one to be a truly successful individual.

  • These days the fashions in clothing are constantly changing. Is this affecting individuals and the environment in a positive or a negative way? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.

    It has been asserted that changing variety of the trendy wearables every other day is influencing people and the environment. Although some may endorse the statement, I strongly consider that the alterations in a fashion industry produce significant negative impacts on a person and the society as a whole.

    To commence, it is very difficult for an ordinary individual to buy fashionable clothes in his limited salary. Therefore, he will work for overtime to earn more which can lead to serious negative health implications. To illustrate, people who work for extra hours, often suffer from lack of sleep, the condition called insomnia which further leads to irritability and a vicious cycle begins that further decline the health of an individual.

    Moving forward, if a whole society is interested in buying trendy outfits, it can harm the society and the environment adversely. To cite an example, the used clothes dumped into the waste-bins when new clothes arrive, so the level of pollution will rise in that particular area. Moreover, the people usually burn the old clothing which can also give rise to lung diseases due to poor quality of the air. The increase pollution level and a number of patient visits to hospitals will make a burden on the economy of a country and prevents the country to prosper more.

    To conclude, I reiterate that rapid changes in the fashionable costumes significantly affect the personal health and psychiatric ailments. Similarly, the state suffers negative economic impacts due to the raised pollution level and over-flow of the patients to the health care facilities.

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  • In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced?

    It has been asserted that rapid financial growth in some countries lead to improvement in the standard of living in the cities but there are no benefits for the rural areas which can be troublesome for the whole state. In this essay, I will discuss the associated problems and how the state can effectively deal with these problems.

    To commence, the most important, by and large, problem associated with unequal distribution of wealth to the cities would lead to urbanization. This is because people will migrate from rural areas to the cities. To illustrate, people always search for the opportunities to improve their lifestyle. For this reason, people will leave their home towns and shift to the cities so that they have better employment and earn more. Besides, the Urbanization would lead to increase pollution due to more homes and vehicles which would have negative impacts on the whole state .

    Moving forward, the government needs to have some solutions to tackle these problems. The primary solution is, that the state implement policies to prevent unequal distribution of resources to either cities or rural areas. To cite an example, the state is responsible to build infrastructure in rural  areas such as roads, health facilities, educational institutions to provide them better opportunities and help them raise the standard of living. Therefore, the risk of Urbanization and pollution can be curbed which will have positive effects on the whole country.

    To conclude, I reiterate that the rapid economical growth in the cities is associated with Urbanization and pollution so the state must regualte policies to share some benefits with the rural areas, and prevents the negative outcomes for the whole country.

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  • More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

    It has been asserted that the number of wild animals is reducing drastically to the level of extinction due to the reason that people hunt them in order to earn money. Although the government is responsible to regulate policies to protect the endangered animals, the nationals on community-level need to run awareness programmes on individual and the community level.

    To commence, the primary reason, by and large, of a declining number of animals is its illegal hunting. This is because rich people preferred to buy the animals to make themselves wearables and decorate their homes with. To illustrate, the skin of the Tiger is used for the production of the leather jackets which is considered fashionable and trendy. In addition, these animals are used for decoration purposes. For instance, the skin of a tiger is filled with sand to make an artificial tiger that looks exactly genuine.

    Besides, it is the responsibility of the government to regulate the policies to curb a problem. The government needs to ensure that there is no illegal killing of the animals. To cite an example, Pakistan issues license to foreigners for 1 million dollars, therefore, they are allowed to hunt Markhor: The national animal of Pakistan, which is cruel, so government must ensure to form policies and restrict such actions. Also, it is the responsibility of each individual that they run awareness programmes in their communities to protect the animals.

    To conclude, I reiterate that illegal killing is the most important reason for the decreasing number of animals and the state must take legislative measures to protect the animals.

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  • Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs – that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. To what extent do you agree with this? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

    It has been asserted that the state is implementing policies such as special taxes on food in order to protect farmers financially. I completely agree with the statement as it is the responsibility of the government to work for the benefits of the low income people.

    To commence, the government regulate policies for farmers to support them. The most important reason, by and large, is these low-income workers work very hard in the fields to grow and supplies healthy food to the citizens of the country. To illustrate, they work round the clock whole year whether it rains or during extremely hot days of the summer to protect the food from extreme weather. Therefore, it is the responsibility of the state to implement policies which are farmers-friendly, motivating and satisfying for the agricultural workers.

    Moving forward, putting taxes on the processed and imported food is useful to uplift the economy of the country which inturns upgrade the standard of living of the ordinary person while some money is collected from the people of the upper class. This circulation of wealth renders society stronger by keeping the poor and the middle class families more happier as they are enjoying the free benefits such as health and education provided by the country.

    To conclude, I reiterate that the government is implementing policies for their farmers that are really helpful for the agricultural workers and motivates them to work more enthusiastically to get more profits of the hard-work. Also, taxes collection from tge rich would likely to uplift the economy of the country.

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  • Many educational institutions give greater importance to subjects related to science and ignore subjects such as drama and literature. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

    It has been asserted that the majority of educational organisations preferred to study science subjects rather than arts and literature due to a concept that Scientific knowledge is necessary to learn for a better future and career. I, however, consider this approach quite optimistic as World needs more advancements which are only possible if we have studied Science and Technology.

    To commence, Science studies are preferred in a major number of educational institutes. The most important reason, by and large, is the need for these studies in the development of our career and prosperity of a state. To illustrate, Scientists can earn more wealth due to their research like a vaccine is made for Hepatitis C recently, for which they received a Nobel price and cash of 1.1million dollar. Moreover,  advancements in technology render a country safe both economically and from wars. For instance, Nuclear weapons can provide cheaper energy which in turn reduce the cost of electricity to ordinary citizens of a state.

    Moving forward, studying science rather than arts and literature is quite a positive development in term of financial stability for a state. This is because scientific development can earn more benefits while literature cannot. To cite an example, the prestigious fighter jets F-17 has manufactured by the government of Pakistan in collaboration with the Chinese government at very low prices while our neighbour country bought their fighter jets from France which cost them a huge sum of their annual budget. So the technological advancements can help a country to stand on its own two feet.

    To conclude, I reiterate that Science studies must be a focus of the educational institutions as it produces a positive impact on the economy of a country and improves the security of a state as well. 

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  • Some scientists believe that intelligent life forms may exist on other planets and some want to send messages to contact them. Others think it is a bad idea because these life forms may be too dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

    It has been asserted that scientists must contact the foreign planets to make a good relationship with them while other opposes this statement as they might be a threat to those live on a planet Earth. In this essay, I will discuss both these views and why I consider that contacting them will not be without any danger as they are far more intelligent than us.

    To commence, it is always good to have terms and connections with the smart people. For this reason, our scientists tries to establish connections with the people living in other planets. This is because, the scientists think that we can benefit from the advancements they made. To illustrate, it is impossible for humans to live in space while space population lives their without Oxygen. Therefore, contacting them seems like the need of an hour.

    On the other hand, it was a custom in the primitive ages that the intelligent and powerful people dominates the weaker one. Therefore, making communication with the people of space may be very dangerous for us. For instance, if we are able to contact them and they consider it a threat to their community, they may impose a war on us and defeat will be our fortune as we will not be able to fight them due to their advance technology.

    In my view, we should mind our own business and not provoke the peaceful citizens of other planets as they are not interfering in our lives.

    To conclude, I reiterate that despite some benefits, we must avoid communicating alliens as they are more advance in the technology and can be a threat to a human life.

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  • In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

    The time spent with children is more important than the money you spend on them. It has been asserted that children get benefitted from the income when both parents are working, however, some oppose this view and opine that children are being neglected. In this essay, I will discuss both the views and why I consider that despite financial benefits, youngers are neglected when both parents work.

    To commence, it is quite obvious that when there is an extra amount of money, it would facilitate the end-users. This is because money can buy most of the amenities that make a child happy. For instance, I used to love bicycle when I was a child and it was my dream, but my father was spending all his earnings to provide us with the food, shelter and education. So, my mother started working as a private school teacher and she bought me a bicycle when she saved enough cash for it. After that, I was very happy.

    On the other hand, when parents are not home, children’s lack emotional support. The reason is, there is an emotional attachment between the parents and their youngers. To cite an example, one of my friends’ sister and her husband work together and left their only child in the home with aunts and uncles. She used to be a very interactive and happy child, but now she is unfriendly as she was crying continously for her mom but there was none to console her.

    In my view, although there is some financial freedom, I opine that one parent must be at the home to care for and provide support to his child in case they need it.

    To conclude, I reiterate that parenthood cannot be replaced by any amount of wealth and physical presence of the parents is imperative to boost confidence in them and support their loved ones.

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  • Some children have a natural ability to grasp foreign languages and for that reason it should not be a mandatory subject in the academic curriculum. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

    It has been asserted that foreign languages such as English and Arabic are not necessary to be a part of mandatory course in the educational institutes. Although this statement may be endorsed by some, I strongly disagree as language like English is spoken worldwide and is the need of an hour to achieve succes in the world.

    To commence, the primary reason that international languages must remain part of the curriculum is to render communication easy thorughout the world. To cite an example, it is very difficult to learn each and every language like Chinese, Spanish or French. Therefore, there must be one language that have been studied around the globe so it would make the world understands each other, no matter what is the primary language.

    In addition, job opportunities are more in the developed countries like the United kingdom or the USA and both are English speaking countries. In order to get visa, one must have to clear English language proficiency exams like IELTS or TOFEL. For instance, medical professionals are required to get 7.5band out of 09 in the English test. After they get the required band, they are eligible to apply for the visa. Therefore, foreign languages are imperative to learn from school time, so that it is easy to qualify language exams and avail jobs in the foreign countries.

    In conclusion, I reiterate that foreign languages are important to learn and muat be included in the curriculum in order to communicate with other fellows around the world and to prosper in one’s own field.

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  • Nowadays, people change their appearance by dying hair, buying fashionable clothes, wearing make-ups, and even undergoing plastic surgery. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

    People yearn to look great since early ages. It has been asserted that people are manipulating their normal look by performing surgical procedures and preferred trendy wearables. Although this trend may be endorsed by some, I am quite pessimistic as this trend is heavily associated with huge financial losses and some unfortunate health risks.

    To commence, the primary reason, by and large, is to look great in order to impress others. This is because people nowadays are more materialistic and judgemental so judge others by their appearance. The Gucci, for instance, is a company that makes expensive outfits. In their ads, they show that person who wore their dress attracts more girls as compared to others. In addition, attractive appearance and nice wearable boost the confidence level according to a recent survey by the fashion magazine which also makes people to manipulate their physical appearance.

    Moving forward, I, however, consider that this trend produces far more negative impacts on the people as it costs huge money. To cite an example, the Bata shoes store, normal adult shoes costs 8000 PKR, and the same are easily available in the ordinary stores in less than 2000 PKR. Moreover, operative procedures like plastic surgery is associated with serious health implications. The Micheal Jackson, for instance, lose his nose due to repeated surgeries. Since then he used to wear nasal replica till his death

    To conclude, I reiterate that just to look great physically despite its deleterious effects on health and huge finances, trendy costumes and surgical procedures are not worth a try.

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  • Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

    It has been asserted that long term imprisonment is more helpful to diminish the rate of crime, however, some people oppose this statement and preferred other methods more beneficial. In this essay, I will examine both views and discuss why I consider that root causes of evil must be addressed to reduce the crime rate instead of an extended stay in lockups.

    To commence, longer prison sentences are an excellent way to decrease the crime rate. This is because it prevents criminals to have an opportunity in an open and free environment. Although I blame the negative attitude of the society for the increase number of crimes, the unstable emotions of the patient are equally responsible as well. So, prisoners retention for a longer period in jails could be helpful in addressing the prisoners behaviour by medical professionals and transforming them into useful citizens of the community.

    On the other hand, there are some other best methods to cope with law violators in the country. Since the physical and emotional torture in a prison is likely to have a negative influence on the prisoners, it is better to adopt other ways. For instance, poverty and illiteracy are often blamed to be the leading causes of offences, so if these factors were addressed properly through proper individual education and implementing policies on the community level, it would be very easy to eradicate the crimes.

    I, however, opine that the state is responsible to work on a grass-root level, to ensure proper education facilities, eradicates poverty and offers psychological counselling to the offenders rather than long term retention in prisons which would reduce the crime rate.

    To conclude, I reiterate that sometimes longer stay in jails may be inevitable, but as long as the root cause of crime is not handled properly, the crime would not show any decline.

  • Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.” To what extent do you agree or disagree?

    There is a saying that parents are the best role models for their children. It has been asserted that female decides either to give birth or not. Therefore, it renders women to further take care of their children as well in terms of character building, financial expenditure and provide them with other basic needs. Although this statement may be endorsed by some, I strongly disagree as I consider both mother and father accountable for the upbringing of the child.

    To commence, it is the responsibility of both the parents to take care of their child. This is because each one has its role. Take father, for instance, he usually loves to play outside sports instead of computer games so it would help a child to grow strong physically as well as emotionally, because games with multiple partners develop sportsmanship and leadership skills, and it is the responsibility of a team leader to knows the inner qualities of his team inmates which obviously requires strong intellectual skills.

    On the other hand, mother or females are good at etiquettes by nature. Therefore, the mother is best to teach her child how to be polite and loveable in order to build a strong relationship with others. To cite an example, a recent survey in the USA state that successful marriages are due to compromises made by females in almost 70percent of the cases and it is the tolerance level that keeps these marriages long-lasting. Moreover, mothers are supportive in case of a failed relationship and can give the best advice in order to rebuild the relation or to move-on.

    To conclude, I reiterate that both parents are responsible to provide good care and love for their children. Similarly, it is a joint effort of both the parents in the upbringing of the children.

  • Some people believe that Governments should spend money on cultural activities (arts, music, theatre). Some individuals think that this is a waste of public money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

    It has been asserted that traditional events such as arts, cinemas and music must be organised by the state even if it costs money while others oppose this view as they consider it wastage of national treasure. In this essay, I will outline why I consider spending money on such events beneficial, as well as why this is a waste of money.

    To commence with, recreational activities are required to keep the nation healthy. While music is sometimes considered as the essence of the soul, arts is best known to keep the culture alive. To cite an example, Ertugrul Ghazi is a drama serial based on Usmania Caliphate which promotes rich Islamic culture, and is also a great source of entertainment. Moreover, the movie theatres are associated with a number of employment opportunities, therefore, it could aid uplift the economy of a country. Hollywood, for instance, produces an Avatar movie, which makes a profit of over a billion dollars. Hence it aids the economy and also promotes the culture of SCI-FICTION movies.

    On the other hand, cultural events are considered to be a wastage of public money. This is because people think that these activities are just for entertainment and not providing any healthy benefits to society. Pakistan, for instance, is suffering from major health-related issues as there is less number of hospitals. So, rather than providing funds for the arts industry, the state must build well-equipped infrastructure in order to address this grave issue.

    To conclude, I reiterate that I agree with the former view that government must arrange traditional activities as the entertainment industry is a good source of recreation as well as providing a number of employment opportunities to skilled people. These activities are also helpful to make under-developed countries stand on their own two feet.

  • Some people like to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while others prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a good thing to spend leisure time with a colleague?

    It has been asserted that some people find it more comfortable to spend free time with their workplace’s companions whereas some stay away from them. In this essay, I will outline why I consider it favourable to have a company with a colleague from the workplace.
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    To commence, the primary reason to support the statement is that the colleagues from the same organisation understand the nature of your job. It is difficult for others from out of the same field to stand in my shoes and feels the same way. The medical professionals or police officers, for instance, usually work twenty-four hours in 03 phases while teachers perform their duty for only 06 hours. So, if the teacher is a friend of a police officer or doctor, he will complain regularly of their proud attitude despite the fact that they might be sincere and busy in the work which would ultimately lead to weaker bond.

    Moving forward, colleagues are helpful and beneficial in case of some urgent work. The workplace’s friends may provide replacement and can handle your work. To cite an example, in case of an emergency, if one is unable to attend his duty, he can freely ask a colleague to perform his duty. Moreover, in case of work stress, sympathetic colleagues can be good listeners who could help relieve the stress.

    To conclude, I reiterate that partners from the same field are beneficial in terms of feeling the same way as you feel and are able to perform your duties when in need or can be good stress relievers. 

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  • Many governments invest a great deal of money in space research. What are the advantages and potential disadvantages of spending money on space exploration?

    There is a global trend to work on space expeditions. For this reason, It has been asserted that the states are spending a huge amount of financial expenses on space exploration. In this essay, I will outline what I consider to be the two  main drawbacks of spending a huge sum of money on space research, as well as some benefits of the practice.

    To commence with, the governments are paying billions of dollars to the space researchers. This is because to explore the extraterrestrial region and use it for the benefit of mankind. For instance, if the earth is destroyed sometime due to the atomic war, it is possible to move the entire nation from earth to space, provided life existed there.

    On the other hand, a huge sum of financial expenditure on a project which may not provide relief to ordinary citizens is totally worthless. The USA, for instance, is spending billions of dollars on space exploration, despite having a multitude of problems including unemployment and unacceptably expensive health system. So, these funds can be utilized to make new industries in order to create more employment opportunities and to reduce hospital expenses for their citizens.

    Moreover, space projects are still associated with high failure rates. The Indian government, for instance, planned and work for years to land its lunar rocket on the moon but it destroyed just before it lands on its target. So, it leads to a huge economic loss for the state and embarrassment for a leading political party.

    To conclude, I reiterate that the government must avoid spending too much money on space research, instead of, on the projects that are more public-friendly, for instance, subsidies on medical treatment or to reduce educational expenses. Therefore, space expeditions are not worth the huge finances.

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  •  In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.  Discuss both views and give your opinion

    It has been asserted that higher job pays could make the country better while there are others that consider it bad and urge the government to implement policies in order to regulate the monthly income of their citizens. I, however, agree with the former statement, and opine that high earnings would motivate the nationals to achieve high paid jobs which would aid the country to prosper more.

    To commence with, the government must provide high paid jobs for some deserving professionals. This is because to attract more talented and hard-working graduates for these posts. To cite an example, civil services officer earn more than a million rupees per annum, but to achieve this position, one must sit in a competitive exam which has a limited number of seats, for instance, the ratio of 1000 to 01. So the best professionals enter in the departments and help the state to excel.

    Another reason to support my opinion;
    The administration, for instance, compels policy to regulate pay, the country may suffer major brain drain, because a huge number of skilled labour would prefer to work in another country to get the desired salary. 

    On the other hand, people think that the state must limit income per annum. This is because to prevent nationals divide into different categories of people. Let’s take an example, the wide gap between the salaries may create class inequalities such as elite class, middle class and poor. Therefore, it could render one class superior while another into inferiority complex which would ultimately weaken the society.

    To conclude, I reiterate, and as I opine that state is responsible to mandate strategies to make a rise in the salaries per annum in order to prevent major brain drain and motivate nationals to get these posts, which would lead to an improvement in the quality of work and build economy due to low corruption rate.

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  • Some people say that in this modern world getting older is entirely bad. However, other people believe that the life of older people is better now than it was in past. Discuss both views and your opinion

    It is asserted by many including me that in this contemporary era, getting older is not good. However, some people believe that older population now lives much more better life as compared to the past times. This essay would throw light on both of these views.

    To commence with, the young man transforming into old age is never a good thing, whether it was past or the present. This is because the one who lives his entire life independently and earns for himself become dependent on others. For instance, there are very few jobs for retired people. That is why, life becomes very difficult for them not only financially, but also socially. Moreover, these old people are having nothing to do most of the time,  so they usually think or sleep all the time which makes them depressed or physically ill.

    Moving forward, older people are now living much more better life as compared to the past. This is due to the initiatives taken by their governments. To cite an example, most of the governments are providing their senior citizens old age homes in case they don’t have shelter. Also, there are post-retirement funds allocated for them and allot them free public transports. These facilities were not available in the past. So obviously, the older population are now enjoying these benefits and lives a better life.

    To conclude, I reiterate that despite some benefits are provided to the older population either by the governments or their families but I hold quite a pessimistic opinion that young age is irreplaceable and getting old is the worse thing happens to anyone.

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  • Many people prefer to stay in the same type of work all their life, whereas others prefer to change the type of work. Discuss both sides and state your own opinion

    Work is essential to earn bread and butter along with other amenities of life. Some people find it more feasible to stick to one type of job through out their life. Nevertheless, there are also some that are happy to change their work frequently. However, I opine that one sort of work is more advantageous. This essay will throw light on both of these views.

    To commence with, people choosing a single job and sticking to it have a number of benefits. The primary one is they get more polished and skilled in his own field. As these people spend a major portion of their time performing it. To cite an example, I choose to work in the hospital. Initially, I was very hesitant to attend a patient but with time, I become very confident and now dealing with them properly. This is because of one type of work that I am doing it for years. Furthermore, organisations usually offer pensions if workers spend a minimum of fifteen to twenty years of their services. So, this is also an added benefit of one type of work.

    Moving forward, some people choose to change their workplaces more often. This is because they think it is more helpful in term of new experiences. For instance, one of my friends was a teacher and he switched to starts his own business in the United States. Now, he is an entrepreneur and gives lectures on international forums. Besides the aforementioned benefit, there is a risk of failure if one is not good enough to switch to a sort of work which is not meant for him. For example, a Pianist choose to sing and he is not fit for it, he will likely to be at risk.

    To sum it up, I reiterate that people must adhere to one type of work in order to be more professional. Also, there is an added benefit of post-retirement fund and less risk of failure in one type of job.

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  • Some people think young people should be free to choose his or her job, but other people think they should be realistic  and think more about their future.  Discuss both views and give your own opinion

    It is debatable whether to choose a job according to the demand of the market or to follow one own’s passion. It is asserted by many that one should be realistic to choose a job in which demand is more in the market. However, others suggest including myself that job is a thing which must be selected by one’s own free will. This essay would throw light on both of these views.

    To commence, self-selection of a job is essential for better outcomes. This is because, he will be more enthusiastic about his work as he chooses it himself. To cite an example,  I choose personally to work in emergency medicine which is a hectic speciality, but I am doing it efficiently even if I am over burden with the flow of patients. A recent survey in Lady reading hospital Peshawar also suggests that residents who have the option to choose their speciality are more confident and honest in their work.

    Moving forward, some people argue to choose a job which is more carrier friendly. They think this way because these jobs provide more fortune. For instance, if a medical doctor choose to pursue his career in under-developed countries, instead of his passion like a pianist or playing the drums, he will have more money and facilities as compared to the latter jobs. So, a major portion of professionals resist their craving to do the work they actually liked.

    To conclude, I reiterate that I am quite pessimistic about the notion of self-selection of the jobs as one really enjoys what job he is doing. Moreover, people are also of opine of carrier friendly jobs which sometimes is crucial for one’s livelihood.

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  • In many workplaces, online communication is now more common than face-to-face meetings. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

    In the era of modern technology, people, especially in the workplaces replaces old conservative methods of the communication like face to face meetings, instead utilizing the best of technology like online services, for instance, zoom online app or google meet to contact each other and gather whenever necessary. In my opinion, this is a great achievement and I considered it more advantageous. Also, this essay would demonstrate that its advantages far exceed its disadvantages.

    To begin with, online communication is far more advantageous as it consumes a lot less time as compared to conventional meetings. To cite an example, if an employee is going to attend  the online meeting, he would not have to worry about traffic jams and to polish his shoes or to press his pant because these are hidden from the rest of colleagues. Moreover, this extra time can be utilized to excel in one’s own real work. Furthermore, online gathering is feasible from one own comfort zone and it makes life much easier. For example, people avoid physical interaction in the recent pandemic of COVID-19 and was also able to work from home. This is because of online technology which proves its worth.

    Moving forward, some demerits are also associated with online services. Online services require a stable data connection and electricity. Hence, failure of any of these would cause disruption in important talks, and therefore wastage of precious time. Similarly, cybercrime is associated with computer technology thus susceptible to hacker attacks. For example, hackers from some unknown location hacked yahoo data servers which were considered major security threats even to other technological databases.

    To conclude, I reiterate that technological  advancements can be proved more beneficial and advantageous in terms of less time expenditure provided that one has a good data connection and secured from hackers.

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  • Missions to explore space are hugely expensive, and there are problems on Earth which demands attention. The number of these missions need to be reduced.  Do you agree or disagree?

    In this contemporary era, people are trying to practice new technological advancements like sending missions to space, creating modern cars that can fly and cars without drivers. These advancements especially space missions consumes a lot of money. Therefore, some people including myself opine that expensive space missions should be reduced and funds allocated for it must be tranfer to other problems that planet Earth is facing like climate changes, hunger and pandemics.
     
    To begin with, space missions are arranged by governments as these requires a huge sum of money which is generally not possible for non-government organisations. For instance, NASA is an American space association, organising missions to space. The purpose of these missions is to control the world and also for financial reasons. Like, people visit space for tourism purposes which fetch millions of dollars from their pockets into bank accounts of the government. However, these are providing no fruitful results to the general public.

    Moving forward, planet Earth faces myriad of troubles such as climate change, hunger in under developed countries and pandemics. These problems can be solved provided adequate money to it. For instance, one billion trees project which is initiative taken by the government of Pakistan and would be very helpful to affect climate positively in the near future. Moreover, number of researches must be increased to reduce pandemics and prevent biological wars. To cite an example, COVID-19 is a virus thought to made in a research lab which causes serious morbidity and mortality. Hence, an ample amount of money is needed for  the researches to prevent such outbreaks in future.

    In conclusion, I reiterate that space expeditions must be reduced as they are not causing any beneficial effects to the general public instead, funds must be provided to problems that Earth is facing, which would bring more peace and happiness to the world.

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  • Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men when applying for a job with the police or the military. Others think women are less suitable for this kind of job. Discuss both views and give your opinion

    With the concept of gender equality and women empowerment, women are participating in a number of jobs, including physically challenging jobs such as carpentry and construction of buildings. So, it is asserted by some that looking into this, women should also take part in more hard jobs like military and police. However, some are against this notion, including myself, for a myriad of reasons which will be discussed in this essay.

    To commence, I hold quite a pessimistic view about women in such hard jobs like military or police services. Women are physically weak as compared to their counterparts because of their regular menstrual cycles which are sort of torment for them. Also, regular menstruation decreases blood count of women and makes them weaker physically. To cite an example, if her menstrual periods start in between of important meetings or in the a war, it can cause discomfort and a change in attitude of the female due to hormonal imbalance, ultimately will affect her performance and overall, her team’s performance.

    Moreover, if a lady is pregnant and war approaches, so the question arises that how will she deal with it? It may cost her pregnancy because of intense training or in another case, can compromise national security if she is unable to do hard training. For instance, it is recommended by the world health organisation that pregnant ladies in her first trimester should avoid heavy weights and try to walk slowly.

    Moving forward to, participation in hard jobs like military services for all genders, women as well as men is of great honour. Therefore, women helping in defence of the country would help the slogan of women empowerment. More so, women in police forces are more helpful in interrogating female prisoners as compared to their opposite gender as a survey conducted by a human right activist in US prisons, that female officers can more effectively interrogate female prisoners. Also, incidents of sexual harassment reduced in number.

    To conclude, I reiterate that there are some positives discussed aforementioned, but as I opine, there are more negatives of this attitude and women should not allowed to be a part of either military or police services

  • In some cultures, children are told that with hardwork anything can be achieved. Advantages and disadvantages of this advice

    It is asserted by some people of different cultures that it is possible to achieve anything, if you are putting all your efforts into it. This advise has both it’s pros and cons. Hence, I will through light on both of these in my essay ahead.

    To begin with, aforementioned advise is very necessary for children’s as it will motivate them and will make them able to achieve for whatever task they are working. For instance, if children’s are preparing for their exams and giving their full effort into it, they might get higher grades as compared to other lazy students. Also, hardworking children’s are appreciated in their families and social circle, so their confidence level is boosted which will help them in their future.

    Moving forward to disadvantages, the greatest one is, if one is not able to achieve his task despite his full potential of efforts, they may get dis-hearted and can go in a state of depression. For example, I know one of my junior in school who commit suicide because of low grades in his class. Moreover, some task requires more intelligence and natural talent rather than hard work. For example, playing chess requires high level of intelligence quotient and it is the thing that you got by birth.

    To conclude my essay, I would like to reiterate that advantages far exceeds disadvantages and advise of hard-working should be given by elders to their children in order to achieve their goal and fulfil their dreams

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  • *These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. *What could be the reasons for this? *Is it a positive or negative development?

    Gender equity brings an enormous changes(instead CHANGE as u write an enormous, an is used as single, so it become AN enormous change) in the society as men are no more superior to women but equal. Like many other changes it brings, one of the most significant is, it changes (no need to write ”it changes” again) the concept of that only mothers will  provide care for their children rather, it is also responsibility of the father to do so. This change his developed for many reasons, and, although, it may have some(no need of some as u only wrote one impact) negative impact like harassment at work, but I hold quite optimistic view and will be evident from this essay about its far more positive effects.

    To begin with, by far, the most primary reason for this is, gender equality. As, not too long ago, men were considered dominant in the society as compared to their counterpart whom(who is correct) were treated very low. Now, women are participating more actively and doing variety of jobs including contact sports like boxing, wrestling and even, rugby. Moreover, other factors also contribute, for instance, education. It plays significant role in making women more aware of their basic human(not necessary,u r already talking of human) rights and makes(s isnt required) them more capable of doing good-earning jobs.

    More so, many great achievements by ladies in their respective field make others acknowledged their part in buildup of our society. Like, taking example of benazir Bhutto, leader of political party , was the first female prime minister of Pakistan and role model for many, including large number of males.

    Moving forward, these changes brings(changes bring not brings) positive effects for both ladies and the society, as a whole. Women are now more confident then ever. Hence, playing their role by more better means in managing their family affairs but, also, in buildup of a better society.

    In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that gender equality and education is the primary reason of making mothers out for work and is affecting families and society in a positive manner.

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  • The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assessment over the school year. What do you think of this trend? Give reasons and any relevant examples

    Education plays pivotal role in development of a society. It is asserted by some, including myself, that pupils should be kept busy throughout the year in term of assessing them rather than yearly or six monthly exams. This trend his developed for many reasons, and, although, I hold quite optimistic opinion {and will be evident from this essay}, that this trend will bring significant improvement in the level of education.

    To begin with, by far, one of the primary reason of this trend {that come into my observation is}, school going children used to study only during their exams rather than study from start of the year. Therefore, this attitude waste[s] them a lot of time, resulting in lower grades. Apart from it, continuous assessment throughout the year keep((X(s)X)) children from more hard work during one time exam in the year, instead they study at their normal daily routine and when there is time, they are ready for [the] exams.

    Moreover, memorization by repetition or rote learning is a curse that major portion of students do[DOES], to prepare (not prepared) themselves for traditional exams[,] because they have forgotten the things they study early in the year.

    Moving forward to {further advance my essay}, I were(was) given a project to findout[02words] depression and anxiety in the school going children before, during and after exams, during my higher studies. Hence, it is no doubt that children having yearly exams suffer more from psychiatric illnesses than those having semester exams. In contrast to traditional exams in Pakistan, one of my friend shifted to US for his International(i) relation studies and now enjoying the fruits of monthly exams.

    To conclude, I would like to reiterate that monthly assessments can be more valuable in term of improving quality of education, provided that government should implement policies and monitor the education level.

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  • Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs. To what extent do you agree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

    It is common saying that when in Rome, do  what the Romans do. It is asserted by many that people visited in foreign lands should act according to the local culture. However, I am quite pessimistic about this notion, and it will be clear from the following essay.

    To commence with, people believe that one should adopt local culture when they visit to place with different culture. This is because people think that not to dis-heart the locals. Although, this belief is associated with positive impact on society like showing respect to one’s traditions and be like one of them, it is also associated with negative impact on individual himself. For instance, one will loose his identity in order to make himself more similar with others. Also, it is difficult for locals to accept foreigners adopting their culture. Besides it, non native can loose his dignity.

    Moving forward, I reside in one of the most scenic place of Pakistan where tourists travel a lot. I observe a couple close to my vicinity in swat, in order to enter the historical mosque in valley, they were dressed almost alike to locals but forgot to enter bare feet. They were immediately recognised non muslims, so people were not happy with them as they are prohibited to enter holy places of muslims.

    In conclusion, I reiterate that embracing local culture by foreigners may be a sign of respect but one should have to know his limitatios, in order to not create problems for himself and most importantly, for locals.

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    It is common saying that when in Rome, do  what the Romans do. It is asserted by many that people visiting foreign lands should act according to the local culture and customs, in order to show some respect. I partly agree with this notion, and it will be clear from the following essay.

    To commence with, people believe that one should adopt local culture when they visit to a place with different culture. This is because not to dis-heart the locals. Moreover, this belief is associated with some positive impacts on the society, like showing respect to one’s traditions and be like one of them. For example, female tourists wearing head scarf in Muslim countries gain more respect as compared to bareheaded.

    Moving forward, this trend is also associated with negative impacts. For instance, one will loose his identity in order to make himself more similar with natives. Also, it is difficult for locals to accept foreigners adopting their culture. To cite an example, I reside in one of the most scenic places of Pakistan, where tourist travels a lot. Therefore, I observe a couple close to my vicinity in the swat valley, in order to enter the historical mosque in the valley, they were dressed almost alike to locals but forgot to enter bare feet. They were immediately recognised as non muslims, therefore, people were not happy with them as they are prohibited to enter holy places of the Muslims.

    In conclusion, I reiterate that embracing local culture by the foreigners may be a sign of respect, provided one should knows his limitation.

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  • The age at which people have children has risen. *Some people believe that because of this, families and countries will suffer some problems. *What is your opinion?

    Not more than a few decades ago, people used to marry at (an) early age and produce(not produces) offsprings earlier. It is asserted by many including myself, that this trend would likely to cause familial and government problems. I opine that there maybe some positives of this trend, however,
    it(childhood bearing) is associated with multitude of problems which will be highlighted/discussed in this essay.

    To commence with, the risen(ADVANCE) age of producing(SIRING is MORE better WORD) babies are associated with number of benefits like, healthy mother healthy kid is a slogan used by some human rights activists. So, if female is becoming mother at more age , there are chances that she would be more healthy, and, in term will produce healthy babies. Also, there are less chances of miscarriage if mother is more than eighteen years of age. Moreover, aged mothers are mentally mature enough, that they are able to provide good care to their children as compared to underage and are able to make them useful citizens of the country.

    Moving forward, apart from the aforementioned positive impacts, there are more disadvantages. With age more than 40 years, there are more chances of mother to become infertile, and also increase risk of syndromic babies. For instance; down syndrome.

    Apart from it, government also suffers negative economic effects as number of patients who requires long term treatment, often for their whole life, increases. Therefore, government should implement policies to ensure proper age limit for marriage and then, delivery of babies.

    In conclusion, It is evident from the essay that there are some positives of this trend, though negatives far exceeds it. Therefore, it is responsibility of the government as well as the newly wed couple, to ensure planned marriages and babies at the best age limit.

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  • Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

    Education plays a pivotal role in the improvement of individual\’s abilities, in turn, helpful to the society. It is asserted by many including myself that, as basic right of the citizens, education fee should be afforded by the government. I completely agree with the notion, that free education would likely to have more positive impacts on the students and a society as a whole.

    To commence with, I agree with the view point of many that education must be free for each one in the country and government is responsible for it. The primary reason is, that  government collect taxes from their nationals which make them responsible for provision of the basic rights of their citizens. For instance, Education. If there is free education, number of students will increase. Like, Govt of Pakistan took initiative in Khyber Pakhtunkhwa province regarding free education, which increases number of admissions in the schools by 33 percent, as compared to previous years. Another reason is, there will be a balance in the fee structure, both in private and public sector institutes because government are paying and will implement policies for it.

    Moreover, quality of education will improve when government pay for it because it is more likely that government agencies would monitor it. To cite an example, private institutions are autonomous. Hence, not responsible to the government of its students grades. .

    In conclusion, I reiterate that free education is must and basic right of the citizens . If Government were paying for education, quality of education will improve.

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  • Giving children and adolescents pocket money Is common Throughout the world  discuss its advantages and disadvantages and also give your opinion

    Pocket money is essential element and is considered very important for childrens and adolescents as they are not earning money and are dependent on others. This is common practice in all over the world. However, being dependent on others for their own well being in form of the pocket money is associated with both pros and cons and I will discussed them both in this essay. Also, I am in opinion that advantages far exceeds disadvantages and this is the basic right of children’s under 18 years.

    To begin with, children’s under eighteen years are usually not allowed to work in many part of the world and considered illegal. In order to fulfill the basic needs of the child, parents are responsible to provide for them so that they can enjoy their childhood better. Also, children’s can concentrate fully on their studies if they are free of stress of earning money.

    Moving forward to disadvantages, childrens can become callous of finances as they are not earning for themselves but their parents . Moreover, children’s can get into trouble and may involve in wrong social practices such as smoking cigarettes or can spend their money carelessly on unwanted things.

    UPTO my mind, I think that pocket money should be given as it’s pros exceeds it’s cons.

    To conclude, parents are responsible for giving pocket money to their children’s to make them enjoy their childhood and stay focused on their studies.

  • Some people feel that music should be taught in schools while others believe it is better to focus on the sciences.  Discuss both views and give your opinion.

    This is the era of science and technology. Also, majority of people are in love with music, whether it is classical, pop or hip-hop. However, I think that science plays more important role in our daily life routine and helps build our country so science studies should be preferred over learning music in schools.

    To begin with, think-tanks are providing multitude of ideas to flourish the skills of new generation, which can introduce into schools as schools are primary area for learning. In order to build our technology up, some researchers suggest that science should be taught in schools. Also, science studies from such early age can makes childrens more creative which would help them in their studies.

    Moving forward to next section of my task which is related to impact of music on school going childrens. Although, I am in opinion of science studies more preferable. But, music can also be useful in schools as it can make studies more enjoyable for students. Also, some schools are providing education in form of music, which gives good results in form of higher grades and excellent attendance. But the impact of music is restricted to individuals only rather than to whole country.

    To conclude my essay , I would like to reiterate that introduction of both science and music as a subject can be useful in learning process of children’s. However, I strongly believe that science should be preferred as main course due to its vast effects on country and worldwide.

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  • Many retired people today are choosing to live in other countries  What are the advantages and disadvantages

    Most of the professionals after retirement choose to leave their country instead trying to move to some foreign place. However, there are multitude of advantages and disadvantages which will be discussed in this essay.

    To begin with, professionals spent a lot of Their youth time staying in one country because of their strict duty schedule. So, they  wants some freedom from already familiar places and to reduce their boredom, moved to next country of their dreams. Also, some people are fond of seeing culture of other countries but unable to do so because of expenses untill they got their pensions as lump-sum.

    Moving forward to disadvantages. However, retired people often find it difficult to adjust in unfamiliar and far flung countries, due to variety of culture differences and regret it after spending their whole savings. Also, if friends and family members are not there in the same country, people often face difficulties and feel helpless if they are in some sort of trouble.

    Moreover, I also agree that people after retirement should visit  to multiple countries provided that savings are sufficient enough, So that, they can enjoy the food and look beautiful places and people.

    To conclude, there is tons of pros and cons if living overseas. So decision living in other countries after retirement should be made wisely and not in hurry.

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  • Many feel that students today should learn practical skills at school such as car maintenance and managing a bank account. To what extent do you agree or disagree

    In addition to school studies, majority of people think that pupils must learn practical skills such as car service and able to oversee their bank account however I disagree completely with this notion as I am strong believer of saying that one should be free completely to fully concentrate on his own studies.

    Moving forward, one can’t be master of everything and concentration on one task at a time is crucial to master one skills, and same goes for school students, as they aren’t mature enough to tackle multitasking. School students are required to have some free time so that they can really enjoy it and not to have wasting their time on car service and accounting. I believe that they can get expert opinion whenever they are in need.

    Aside from it, once I tried to learn in my school days that how to get rid of my bicycle mechanic as he was impolite and makes me waited for long time so that he don’t have to work for me as I don’t have a lot of money to give him So I tried to learn some tactics but failed miserably in it, also I got my marks very low in few subjects.

    To conclude, I strongly disagree with the statement and believe that students shouldn’t waste their time on these extra tasks, instead pay full concentration on their studies to get good marks and built their carrier.

  • There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?

    World population is more than 07billion by the year 2020 and increasing rapidly as people were not aware of the concept of fellow mankind becoming problem for them and their Home ie Earth. Howeverl some are going to recognize overpopulation as a problem and tries to reduce it so adapts a small family method. As we know that majority of methods including lifestyles are associated with cons and pros so as small families.

    In my opinion, advantages far exceeds disadvantages such as parenting are easy with one child or two childrens as compared to more than it as parents can pay more attention to them and keep them under their eyes most of the time. Next good thing with small family is less expenses even if one parent is working, he/she will be able to provide for them properly.

    Moving forward to disadvantages, the biggest one is children’s often get rude in small families as compared to their counterpart and I blame it’s cause is ignoring their bad behaviour by parents because they are so deep in love with them and Ultimately parents are unable to control them. Besides to, some children also blame their parents of extra strictness and compare their lifestyle to the prisoners in jail.

    To conclude all this, I think balance should be maintained between care and extra strictness to make one’s child more caring and useful to their elders and society as a whole.
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  • IELTS Essay Band 7: Some people think watching movies is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

    Compare to ancient times when there aren’t enough opportunities of entertainment, modern ages provide tons of it such as movies, video games but watching movies is associated with lots of pros and cons one of which is waste of time and I fully agree with it.

    What I think is that when I watch movies on my laptop, I love to open my YouTube and start searching for it which costs me a lot of time as people uploading it provide fake thumbnails to the display picture and also fake names so when I am done watching it l hate it because it is not the same told by my colleagues. Then as I move to comments section I saw some bad comments which makes me rush to review section which is worse than I imagine and left me blank. So I waste my time like this and then again scrolling YouTube to look for original one.

    On conclusion, UPTO my mind that watching moves can cause alot of time wastage if one is not aware of how to use computers and softwares. Also I am in opinion that watching isn’t good for health in this era of sedentary lifestyle where it can further take your time of exercise and makes population more lazy.

  • Some people believe that poverty is the cause of most crimes? Do you agree or disagree?

    This essay is about the effects of poverty over personal behaviour and most importantly negative response to it. Crime ratio is more in poor income countries as compared to rich one and I agreed with the essay topic.

    In my opinion, Poverty plays some role in making person more negative toward world as one needs money in order to achieve one’s goal and if there isn’t enough money to get what you want then obviously would recognise the importance of money. After that it makes one vulnerable to think of making money by any means rather that wait and tries his/her talent and hardwork but easy ways which is often of criminal activities which looks easy but actually isn’t and ended up in prison. However parental training also is important in developing child’s behaviour but they are unable to do so because they are very busy to find food, shelter and also to cope with other expenses of their family after that they are not able to think of their childrens behaviour even if they want to.
    Children’s of poor families also suffer from physical abuse as well as emotional in their homes and Thier workplaces as they were unaware of basic human plus labour rights and are usually underage which also makes them prone to criminal activities. So government must takes necessary actions to prevent child labour and makes child care services more accountable to provide help to kids of poor families.